I want my readers to not only imagine a scene, but feel the emotions of the characters.
It’s always a treat when my own writing makes me swoon. This is one of those times.
Book Excerpt
Verge of Corruption - Love’s Warrior Book One
Tris cocked his head ear to shoulder. He dipped to her level and captured her gaze with his own. Fierce heartfelt vibes charged the air around them as she slid her fingers into his hair and brought his lips to hers. The wild taste of him struck Zestine with a sense of relief, like sucking air after being oxygen-deprived. He kissed her with a passion and tenderness she’d never known. A surreal feeling took hold, as if the world paused, as mesmerized by them as they were by each other. More than a mere kiss, it was a declaration as well as a dedication to each other. Zestine’s sounds of pleasure, the enthusiasm of her lips and tongue, told him the depth of her feelings and how hot she burned for him.
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