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Anita Tosh
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The Book of Jeremy
Science Fiction & Fantasy
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Opening Scene
The opening scene of a book is very important. Does it make you want to keep reading? I will soon begin editing this book and would love some feedback. If you would like to find out what happens to Jeremy after the water baloon, click the button to the right. Respond "yes" and leave your email address so I can send you the full chapter. I will not share your email with anyone. Also, I would love your honest feedback on the chapter. "Too long", "boring", "interesting", whatever. And when the book is published, you can say,"I helped". Thanks and God bless. P.S. Please check out my websit for more.
Book Excerpt
The Book of Jeremy
“Jeremy Linden!” The voice of his mother trumpeted through the house. The boy froze in mid-stride. Could his mother see him? She was in the other room. How could she know? He soundlessly completed his step.
“Jeremy!”
He exhaled. How did she do that? He knew she didn’t have eyes in the back of her head. She couldn’t see through the wall. Jeremy looked at the wall that separated himself from his mother. He looked at his sister, then at the small water balloon he held in his hand. What's a twelve year boy to do? He quickly threw the balloon at his sister and ran out the back door, his angry sister in hot pursuit.
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