Jessi O’Donnell was your typical teenager, until a bus accident changed her life and allowed her to hear the sounds of events 24 hours before they happen! She has kept this ability a secret but when she hears the sounds of a woman being murdered, that all changes. How will she convince people that a murder will happen when she’s the only one, besides the killer, who knows?
I'm certain that you've heard the phrase that someone, "cleans up good" and probably even know a few people like that. Have you ever seen a person who, just by changing one or two things about their everyday appearance, can render them almost unrecognizable? That's what happens in this short excerpt from my book, "Sounds Of Tomorrow" where Jessi sees the nerdy co-worker transformed. See what you think and please, enjoy!
Some people hear the words, "black belt" and chuckle. Others become wide eyed and tremble in fear. Most find a degree of respect knowing that the person studied hard and long to obtain the prize. The knowledge that goes along with that degree is impressive none-the-less. In this short excerpt from my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" the main character has just been started and shows her new friend that startling her might not be the wisest thing to do. Please enjoy!
Have you ever volunteered to help and ended up with more than you thought you would get? It happens sometimes and in this short excerpt from my book, "The Sounds of Tomorrow" Erin finds out just how much she can end up with by volunteering! Please read this short excerpt and see what you think, then consider purchasing a copy and reading this futuristic murder mystery!
Have you been threatened? Were you certain that it was a threat or did you wonder whether or not it could be a joke? Did it make you fell uncomfortable? Was it unnerving? What if you received a threatening phone call? How would you react? What would you do? Please take a look at this short excerpt from my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" and see how you might react to such a situation.
In "The Sounds of Tomorrow", Jessi develops the ability to hear the sounds of traumatic events 24 hours before they happen. Think about how it would affect you if you were able to do such a thing. Could you change the future? Could you save a life? In this short excerpt, Jessi hears something that makes her question her sanity. It's one of the first future sounds she's heard, so it makes her wonder how healthy her mind is. Please read and see how you would feel in such a situation. If this intrigues you, I hope that you'll consider purchasing a copy. Thanks!
In "The Sounds of Tomorrow" a murder is going to happen. The only clue that the main character has, is that she heard this murder happen 24 hours in advance. It's her talent. Her friends have offered to help her figure out who the murderer is and who will be the victim. Here is a short conversation which her friends are having at the police station with a detective. How would YOU explain that someone is about to be killed and the only evidence you have is that your friend heard it happen already?
We all have made a promise or two during our lives. I feel like we've all had to break a promise or two in our lives, most of the time not because we want to, but because something happens in our lives that prevent us from keeping that promise. My mother used to tell me to, "never make a promise that you can't keep" and so I've tried hard to live my life by those words. This excerpt revolves around a promise made by one man to his girlfriend, and her determination that he's going to keep it. See how she handles it and if you would do something differently, but mostly please enjoy this "Sounds of Tomorrow" excerpt.
What do you think of being confined? Do you mind smaller spaces? Do they present to you, a feeling of panic and dread? What about elevators? Are you fine with just one or two people? What about ten? I've never been a big fan of enclosed spaces, but I can tolerate them.I don't feel the urge to claw my way out. But many people have that fear and, in today's society, it can become a real issue. Now, with many people having to work from home, these fears of being confined might be exaggerated to a point where the only comfort lies outside. Please read this short excerpt and see if you can relate. If you can, I hope that you'll consider reading this murder mystery called, "The Sounds of Tomorrow". Thanks!
Have you ever heard a long story and have tried to related that story to a friend? Sometimes it's difficult to sum up the entire story, but when you're able to do so, people are impressed. Please take a look at this excerpt from my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" and see what you think. I appreciate it!
How do you do with the sight of blood? Is it something that you can handle easily, or does it make you queasy and light headed? We all have different reactions to different situations. We often compare ourselves to others and find ourselves to seem weaker or stronger just because someone else reacts differently. See how you would react to this situation knowing that we are all different. If you enjoy this passage, please consider purchasing a copy of, "Sounds of Tomorrow". I'd really appreciate it!
Have you ever known someone who "cleans up pretty good"? Someone that you know maybe from work, who doesn't always dress the best because of their job? Maybe you see this person out an about on a day off only to discover that you almost don't recognize them. There has been a transformation! Maybe even to the point where you become speechless, flustered, and a little shy.What would you do in that situation? Please read this short excerpt from my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" and see what you think!
It's the beginning of a new year, and each hour of everyday will contain surprises. We know that some surprises are good, and others are uninvited and unwanted. No matter how hard we plan our lives, surprises are inevitable. What happens if you plan a surprise and the results go terribly wrong? Your best intentions end up having the worse results. But even when our actions turn out badly, we often have a chance for redemption. In this short excerpt from my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow", Jim tries to surprise the girl of his dreams, only to have it turn out disastrously. Please enjoy this quick read and if you like what you read, please consider purchasing a copy . Thank you!
We plan and plot and work hard to create an outcome that our minds and hearts will be content with. When our plans begin to fall apart and the threads of plotting start to unravel, we look to others and in other places to shore up our plans and get back on track. How do you handle such events? Please take a look at this short excerpt from my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" and see what you think. If you enjoy it, then please consider purchasing a copy. I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!
There have been a few times in my life, when the concept of trying to explain something extraordinary to someone else, seems to be an arduous task. Although I'm a writer, or perhaps because of it, talking about fantastic things create fantastic situations. When I DO have interesting things to say, I choose carefully, who I say them to. Heaven help me if tell these stories to the wrong person. They might mistake my stories for a fit of lunacy on my part. In thinking about this, I wrote this scene where Barry is explaining fantastic things to a police detective, much to the dismay of his girlfriend. Take a read and let it make you smile and please consider purchasing a copy of "The Sounds of Tomorrow"!
Right now in my life, I catch shoplifters for a living. It's not all that fun but it certainly lets you know that you're alive. Often in life, we don't really experience what life is about, unless we experience fear. We need our bodies to get a jolt of some kind to let us feel alive, otherwise, we simply exist. A few weeks ago, a shoplifter punched me in the face. It wasn't fun but it was certainly different. It made me look at life differently if only for the moment. In this short passage, my character is suddenly attacked, and though he isn't seriously hurt, it disrupts his life and that of his girlfriend. But it also changes how he views the world and teaches him something about himself. Please take a moment to read and let me know what you think of my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow".
Have you ever had a friend that you can talk to about anything? Laugh with? Share your deepest thoughts with? Tease endlessly? Jessi and Erin are this way. Erin is in a quandary, and as a result, she's becoming much too serious for Jessi's liking. As sometimes happens while at a restaurant, Erin dragged Jessi into the women's restroom, where she is discussing the issues of her night. But jessie is not going to let Erin's mood ruin the evening. See what you think about this short passage and if you like it, please consider purchasing a copy of my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow".
Family reunions are often eye openers when you haven't seen certain family members for a while. When you aren't a member of the family, however, and sit in on a conversation, you might find out things that you never knew. Brother and sister sit in a conference while a new girlfriend listens in. She learns new things about her boy friend that will certainly enhance future conversations. Please read this short excerpt and see if you can relate. If so, please consider reading a copy of my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" and let me know what you think! Thanks.
My grandfather used to say, "You should never worry. If you worry enough you get sick, If you get sick enough you die. If you die, you have nothing to worry about, so why worry to begin with?" It's true, and yet, we all do it. We care. We want things to be good. We worry that they won't be. How about you? How much do you worry? Please read this short excerpt from my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" and let me know what you worry about. And if the passage is interesting to you, please consider purchasing a copy. I's really appreciate it. Thanks.
We've recently been upset, as a country, with how many secrets are being kept in the government. How many lies are being told. It makes us upset when people we trust are not completely truthful with us. So when someone close fails to include us in important things happening in life, we tend to become upset. Please read this short passage from my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" and see if you can relate to these feelings. And if you find it interesting, I hope that you'll consider purchasing a copy. Thanks!
Have you ever had one of those moments when you're sitting with a friend and a question is asked that neither of you quite know how to answer? I've been in that situation and I hoped that my friend would have said something. Neither of us spoke. It was dead silent until the person questioning us finally gave us some gentle, but firm, encouragement. I hope that you'll enjoy this brief moment from my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" and if you find it interesting, please consider purchasing a copy. I would really appreciate it. Thanks!
Have you ever been driving down the road, minding your own business, when something unexpected happened. Maybe you, as the driver, didn't see it first, but your passenger screams out and it's time to react. How did you handle that? How did you feel? Please take 30 seconds to check out this excerpt form my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" and see what you would do. If you like what you read please consider purchasing a copy. I'd really appreciate it! Thanks!
You have had those moments. Your know the ones. You want so badly to remember a name, an event, a date, but it's just not there. On the tip of your tongue; the edge of your brain. It bothers you and consumes you until that one sweet moment when it breaks through and reveals itself to you. Please enjoy this short excerpt from my book, "The Sounds of Tomorrow" and if you can relate to this, please consider purchasing a copy to read. Thanks!
We see certain people in everyday environments and become used to the way they look. We've all seen those people in other settings and wonder where we know them from. This one is a shocker! I hope that you enjoy this short excerpt from my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" and if you like the writing, please consider purchasing a copy! Thank you!
There is something that happens in each of our lives, that cause us to take pause, to rethink, to wonder about our future or that of someone else. What if you could hear the future? What if you heard a murder? Please enjoy this short excerpt from my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" and if this intrigues you, I hope that you'll purchase a copy. Thank you!
Have you ever received a phone call from a stranger that sounded ominous and somewhat threatening? How would you feel in a situation like this one? Please enjoy this short excerpt from my YA murder mystery, "Sounds Of Tomorrow".
Teenagers should have times of joy and sharing a day with friends. This short excerpt allows you a small peek into a day of joy of our main character, Jessi. See if you can relate to a day like this from your teen years and if you enjoy it, please consider reading a copy of "Sounds of Tomorrow".
We all have friends. There are times, certainly, when we can feel very alone but for the most part, and if we are honest with ourselves, we all have friends. It's nice when we and our friends can get together and share a variety of thoughts, emotions, and laughter. At the beginning of the story we quickly learn about this friendship between Erin and Jessi, and the comfort and depth that this friendship enjoys. It's important to see this friendship for what it is early on and how it maintains and progresses throughout the coming years. Please have a quick read and if you're so inclined, purchase a copy of my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow". Thank you!
Life is filled with suspenseful moments. They can full us with excitement or dread, fear or anticipation. Sometimes, the suspense will fill us with curiosity. But we all know what they say about curiosity...and the cat! These pages, which include this short paragraph, lead us up to the climax of the story. I wanted to leave you with a feeling of being in Jessi's shoes, and knowing what and how she's feeling. I hope that you'll take a moment to read this short excerpt and then consider reading Sounds of Tomorrow!
I've realized that we all have some type of illogical fear that borders on paranoia at some point in our life. In my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" Barry shows that paranoia when he and his girlfriend have to speak with a police detective at the station. I invite you to read this excerpt and see if you can relate on some level, with the feelings that Barry is having. Enjoy!
People tend to look at us differently. They see what stands out in their minds about us. It's not a judgement really, but more about what makes us funny, or odd, or likable, in the mind of the person looking at us. Whether family or friends, our most memorable traits stand out. Sometimes when brought out in a conversation, these traits can also become surprise tidbits to those around us. Please enjoy this short offering from my book, "Sounds of Tomorrow" and see what you think!
We rely on our phones so much in this age of modern technology. When we can't reach someone by voice or text we tend to worry. If it's a loved one we can often become frantic. We can, once that person is found, then turn our relief into anger. Has this ever happened to you? It becomes a turn around that can confuse the person being found. Please enjoy this short excerpt and see if you can relate to this scenario!
The other day I answered my phone only to hear my friend sounding frantic because he had lost his wallet. He went through the list of places where he had tirelessly searched, and then through the list of items he would have to cancel and replace. I made a few suggestions of other places where he could look and he continued searching while speaking with me. It's funny how we can panic over the littlest things in life, not knowing what the next few moments will bring. And yet, in the end, things always seem to work out. This short segment from "Sounds of Tomorrow" is much like that. See if you've ever ben through something like this. Oh, and my friend found his wallet. He normally kept it in his pants pocket, but the day before he absentmindedly placed it in his coat pocket. Worked out. :-)
How do you sleep? How do you dream? What do you feel like when that awkward moment hits combining both dream and reality? You know, those moments when a sound is incorporated into your dreaming subconscious and in the groggy aftermath you have no idea if it's reality or imagined. This short passage from "Sounds of Tomorrow" shows my character, Jessi, as a noise pulls her from her dreams, but she's unsure if it's real or a part of her mind playing tricks on her. What would you think? Please enjoy this short excerpt and consider reading "Sounds of Tomorrow" to follw the adventure.
You know, I've heard of some pretty strange meetings between people and even some stranger ones that have resulted in long lasting friendships, but I think this one takes the cake. I'm not really sure how I would react if in a similar situation. How about you? Would something like this make you curious enough to find out more about this person or would it cause you to walk away and not even look back? See what you think while reading this excerpt from "Sounds of Tomorrow" available now!
Have you ever had one of those moments when you are startled by someone or something? Your first reaction is fright. Your next reaction is either anger or relief. Sometimes both. This is what's happening here. Only the person who is sneaking up and surprising, forgets that the people he's sneaking up on are martial artists. Probably not the best choice in either the real or fictional world. How would you proceed being on either side of this confrontation? Go ahead and read this short excerpt I prepared for you and then consider reading, "Sounds of Tomorrow" and let me know what you think!
So you know that I write books. I'd say that I write stories but really it feels like I'm just a stenographer for the characters that are living in my head. That might sound kind of strange, I know, but sometimes when I write I feel like I'm watching the stories unfold as the characters play out the scenarios. I get as excited about writing them then I do reading them after they're done. It's strange really. So I have to go back and read my stories over after they're done, just to remember what all happened. Crazy, huh? I love that my characters think like me though. That's the one thing that helps me know my sanity is in tact. When Jessi's boss tells her that weekends are meant to be enjoyed, it made me smile. Someday I'll have my weekends free. In the meantime, enjoy this short except that I chose for you.
When I was thinking about the concept for this book I thought about how stories portray people predicting the future. I wanted to come up with something different. I decided that my character could only hear the sounds of future events. I wanted to see what type of challenges such a person would need to overcome and then figure out how to overcome them. This made for a wonderful mystery story. I hope that you'll enjoy this short excerpt where Jessi has to admit to herself that she has a strange power that other might not be able to understand!
We've all heard it. Each of us get that elusive 5 minutes of fame sometime in our lives. It's rarely earth shattering or worldwide. It's usually only within our small community but it feels amazing. Once we've had that taste of that fame, that popularity, that universal acceptance as it were, we continue to hunger for it the rest of our lives. For the most part and in some small corner of our lives, this is why we do everything. We hope for acceptance. We hope to be the best. In this excerpt, Jessi returns to school after an experience that most of us never have to go through. See what you think.
My life is filled with firsts. I have a love/hate relationship with them. As with everyone, some of the firsts are good and others not so much. The funny thing about them is that because they are firsts, we sometimes don't realize what they are, or that they will ever happen again. In this excerpt, Jessi hears the future for the first time but doesn't know what to think. See if you would feel like Jessi did as you read this excerpt from "Sounds of Tomorrow". Enjoy.
I've been in accidents before. I think that it's possible that we all have. I tried to remember what it was like to be in an accident back when I was a teenager. It was scary and interesting all at the same time. What if it was an entire busload of my friends? What if one of them was taken to the hospital? I relived a few moments from my teen years and incorporated those feelings into this excerpt. See if you have ever felt this way and consider reading, "Sounds of Tomorrow" being published soon.
Book 1 in the Tokorel series. Life, death, romance and archaeology will drastically change the histories of two civilizations and create tensions that only the prophecy could predict. One non-believer, however, is thrown into the middle of it all and refuses to accept that she could be the center of the words of her enemy. Will she become the salvation of two worlds or their destructive force?
When your adrenaline begins to pump and your heart races, what do you do? What thoughts race through your mind? Do you feel the need to flee or are you ready to fight with every ounce of your being? What if you knew that there was a chance you wouldn't survive? In my adventure, sci-fi novel, "Khizara" you'll see action, romance, and edge of your seat moments such as this excerpt. Please take a moment to read and see what you think. Coming soon, Khizara will be one of the best action stories you've read in a long time!
Over 200 years, histories become twisted. Heroes are formed. Villains are created. First hand witnesses die off and entire stories become transformed into fables and bedtime stories. But what if a ghostly prominent figure from the past were to appear in front of representatives from both sides of the revised history? What if he could speak, telling the realities of the past. Would we be ready to hear that our heroes and villains were just ordinary people? How would we received the truth? Please enjoy this short excerpt from my upcoming book, "Khizara".
When a storm begins we typically tend to seek shelter. We want to be safe and dry. Sometimes, ok often, the storm is not well timed and Mother Nature throws at us whatever she can at her pleasure. In this short excerpt, Mother Nature sends a storm at a very inopportune moment that may, or may not, be recaptured later. Please take a moment to read this short excerpt from my book, "Khizara" and see what you think. Thank you!
When you're trapped and there's nowhere to go, you can feel like it's the end. But is it really your time, or will some miracle save you from leaving this world and thrusting you into the next? Please enjoy this short excerpt and watch for "Khizara" coming soon!
When fact combines with fictitious rumors an entire story can explode into something that includes infamous characters and might spread your name into the infamous category. Linsora is a colorful character for certain. Direct and to the point. Please take a moment thread and enjoy this short excerpt from my forthcoming book, Khizara. I hope you enjoy!
When applying places you are frequently asked what you have done in your past. When applying as crew on a ship, you're asked when you do the best. This short conversation show a lot of the main character and the Captain she's interacting with. Please read and see what you think, and if you enjoy it, please consider purchasing a copy of this amazing story. Thanks.
No matter how tough we are, no matter how immune we are to the dealings of the world around us, we all have sentient for at least one thing. It could be different in each of us, but it's there none-the-less. In this short excerpt, Permac looks around his home one last time before leaving. It becomes a sentimental moment in which he thinks about his time there and yet it's interrupted by his new companion. It's a short read that I hope you'll enjoy. Watch for "Khizara" coming in October 2020. You're going to want more!
They say that with age comes wisdom. There are times when we need to look to those who came before us, in order to discover what we need to do to secure our future. We often come face to face with that wisdom, and it can be an unpleasant experience when we are learning, growing and in the wrong. Please enjoy this short excerpt from my book, "Khizara" available October 1, 2020. I know that you're going to love it!
Who are you when you're alone? Who are you around others? Deep down, we are who we are. We show our true selves to only a few, and to so many others, we show our outer shell. The layer that we want others to see. When you have to spend time alone with someone; perhaps for an extended period of time, you get to know who that person really is and they, you. Please enjoy this short excerpt from my book, "Khizara" coming soon to many online outlets.
Two civilizations have been apart for over 200 years, and yet their similarities remain, including the basic of all instincts. Two enemies reach a point of passion in this sci-fi thriller. She once tried to kill him but time does strange things to relationships. See how two people turn their desires to kill into plain desires. Khizara is coming soon!
As an archaeologist, Linsora is in the business of finding, and restoring, items. In this excerpt she found several pieces of glass like fragments. Taking them back to the ship, she wonders what they could have been from. She notices that some of the fragments have a small plant in them. With the help of her assistant, they make a remarkable discovery. Have you ever looked at something only to discover something entirely different a few moments later? Please enjoy this excerpt from the book, "Khizara" and watch for it coming soon!
Have you ever known someone that you can and can't live without? Not a toxic relationship, but a relationship with someone who is your best and worst side. Someone who you can argue with, not always win, and still have a good relationship? I hope that you'll read this short excerpt from my book, "Khizara" and let me know what you think. It's a fun and exciting story. Some of you read it under a different title. If you have, please tell your friends about it. If you haven't, well, just take a quick look!
Three little words that should lead to resolution, and yet they often lead to anger, bitterness, arguments and break-ups. In this short excerpt from my book, "Khizara" you'll witness first hand, the fine relationship that Permac and Linsora share. Have you ever had such a relationship? Please see what you think and watch for the rerelease of this amazing science fiction story coming in the next few months! Thank you!
Our worlds are made up of realities and fantasies. Our memories reflect that. Some of our memories reflect the truths of our past, while others are bent and slightly distorted. It's not often that we can face the realities of our past memories but when we have that chance, we find it difficult to reconcile what was and what we thought, was. History is the same. Stories become warped and people believe what we are told. Archaeologists find new, old, documents from time to time that shake the foundations of what we believe. In this short excerpt from my book, "Khizara", such a document is found. Take a read and see what you think. If you enjoy this, watch for the release of this incredible science fiction story!
I've never been good at cards. I don't know why really, I just know that I'm not. My characters on the other hand, seem to have the ability that I lack and can certainly bluff their way through many situations. This is one of those times. Could you do this? If you knew that the person standing next to you could sense your true feelings, would you be able to conduct such a bluff? See what you think and please enjoy this short excerpt.
I have had several near misses in my ife. I'm not talking about a car almost hitting me, or ducking just in time to avoid being decapitated. Instead, I'm talking about receiving a small amount of unexpected money just before an unpaid bill is due. A phone call at the last minute requesting my services for a new client. A third party decision that makes things go much better in my life. These things happen in life and I try to incorporate them into my stories. This small segment is such a twist. Take a look and see what you think and enjoy this excerpt from book one in the Tokorel series.
You can't go home again. that's what they say. The reality is that you CAN go home again, but often times things are not as you remembered them to be. There are the small familiarities that may spark a flood of memories, but not all is as it was. Linsora has returned to her home world after being gone for a very long time. She spent the night enjoying the food and drink that she's missed, but now the morning light is shining old memories and present realities on her. What will she have to face? what people from her past will she encounter? Where will these encounters lead her? Read this short excerpt and see if you can relate to her feelings!
I have had situations when I feel pretty helpless. Situations where I despise what's going on and possibly the person involved with the situation, but I have little to no control over what's happening. Has that ever happened to you? In my mind, during that moment, I plan revenge. Do I carry through with it? Seldom, but planning and plotting the revenge certainly feels good. It turns me into a braver image of myself and one who can ignore the rules of society without actually committing the crime. Is this odd do you think? Probably not. My character is like this in the scene which you're about to read. She's just waiting and plotting. See why and enjoy this segment of "Khizara", book one int he Tokorel series.
Our bad guy, Gordek, is truly bad. Not so much evil and not an insane and maniacal villain, but bad. He knows what he's doing and often enjoys the discomfort that he gives others. He's greedy and power hungry. He wants others to know what power he has and that this power extends over everyone he meets, especially those he holds captive. Poor Linsora receives double as he not only holds her captive, but has a lusting desire for her, and he will do anything to have her. This means that he's willing to exploit her weaknesses to gain the control that he needs over her. This short segment is one of the times when he is slightly less than human. See what you think and please consider reading "Khizara" book one in the Tokorel series.
I've always wondered about people and how they deal with loss. Some people are strong or at least seem strong in public, but mourn in private. Others can let it out emotionally no matter where they are, showing the world their sadness at the loss of someone so dear. Our hero, Linsora, is a very strong woman, but even at a time like this her actions can be unpredictable and erratic. How do you act when you experience a loss? See if what Linsora experiences sounds familiar to you in this short excerpt.
There are times when we all dream of being the hero. We imagine what it would be like to defeat the forces of evil and be the envy of everyone we meet. My characters are no exception. Ok, I'm no exception but I can live it out through my characters. I intentionally put my heroes in harm's way to see how they'll escape and in this case, the first thing that happens is that trust must be regained. I hope that you'll find this short excerpt intriguing and that you consider reading my book sometime in the future.
In the Tokorel series, my characters have the opportunity to explore many worlds. Some worlds are deserted while others have both friendly and unfriendly inhabitants. I often wonder what it would be like to arrive on a world that's inhabited and what the reactions of those inhabitants would be. I imagine that it would depend on how advanced they are and how alike we are. There are so many possibilities that I dream about. This excerpt is just one of those possibilities and I think, rather interesting. See what your thoughts are!
A recurring character in this series is the mysterious Moragh. It's difficult to tell if he's good or not so much. Sometimes he's helpful and at other times you just want him to go away. Making him go away, however, is difficult as he is quite powerful. He seems to be helpful at this moment so our main characters are listening intently and welcoming his advice, that is until he says one thing that strikes discord with Linsora. Take a look and see what you think in this short excerpt and please consider reading "Khizara" coming out in a few weeks!
There reaches a point in all relationships where love either flourishes or dies. It's that strange crossroad that intersects the paths of life-long friendship and partnership. Sometimes that intimate connection takes a small push from circumstance while other times it take a large shove from fate. See which path you think this will take and from whence it came!
In most countries on most continents and with most peoples we tend to make our past founders larger than life. They did little or no wrong. They were people to be looked up to and idolized. We would teach each generation about their heroism and acts of superhuman compassion. Their wisdom was amazing. So how would we feel to see the image and testimonial, in their own words, of what these people were really like? That was my thought as I wrote this book. That's what has just happened in this scene. Now, Permac has to wonder how he will continue with this knowledge and how he will tell his people. See what you think and please enjoy!
As a person I always try to keep the peace. I try to be the first to admit wrong and the last to storm out of the room in anger. I guess some of that rubbed off on my character of Permac. He tries as hard as I'd like to think that I do. He wants to not only keep the peace, but he wants to win the girl as well. He can see how she would compliment him in everything he would attempt. He can see how she would make him whole. She, on the other hand, wants little to do with hi unless it's absolutely necessary. It was a battle of the wills and this particular battle was about to come to a head! See what you think of this passage and please consider reading "Khizara" when you have the chance! You'll like it.
In observing life I've realized that even within an organization there is some level of conflict, jealousy, admiration and competition. It doesn't matter if it's a family, a large corporation or a military organization. So when I have one person reporting to another, I want to make sure that the proper checks and balances are there, and I believe that this particular scene was the best place to start. I wanted our characters to have a good relationship but I also wanted to show that there is a definite pecking order and respect. See what you think and please consider reading "Khizara" in the future!
During my lifetime I've had adventures and I've travelled. Sometimes, I can't wait to get going because of where I'm going. Other times I just can't wait to leave where I am. Drawing on those experiences, came this scene. I knew exactly how I wanted Linsora to feel as she was waiting for the ship that would take her, and Permac, to their next destination. Where she was was certain. Where she would be going was not. Adventure is in her blood and she was ready. I've been there and I knew that for most of her adult life she had been there too. See what you think with this small excerpt from "Khizara" and enjoy!
When I created this Terran Captain, I wanted to portray someone who loves what he does, but a person who is also tired of the routine of a captain whose crew changes much too often. Haavens was born. Our captain is signing up new crew members which is the perfect way for out heroes to escape this planet. The good captain is about to meet Permac and Linsora, two individuals who only needed each other long enough to reach this point in line. Time will tell who will win out, but I'm guessing it will be the one with the most authority...maybe.
Just as when we developed Khizara, I had to come up with something unique for the world of Tokorel. After much thought I decided to give the Tokorellans a unique gift and a curse all wrapped up together in one ability. So I gave them the ability to not only sense the true emotions of the people around them, but to also be able to change those emotions. Besides being banned from all poker games throughout the known universe, the Tokorellans seem to get along with most people, that is until one Tokorellan, Permac, meets one Khizaran, Linsora, who can tell when she's being emotionally manipulated and doesn't take kindly to it. See what you think in this excerpt of "Khizara", book one in the Tokorel series.
In writing this book and creating the Khizaran society, we needed something that would make these people stand out. They are highly emotional, structured, and have a lust for life. They also all carry knives. From the time they are ten years old, they are taught to use knives as a way to be more equal in their society. Outsiders, such as Permac, don't understand the need for such weapons. But then Permac and his people have a weapon of their own. It's a mental ability to sense and control the emotions of others and many outside of his society don't understand that. Two people skilled in their abilities to defend, but using much different techniques. See what you think of this excerpt and watch for "Khizara" coming soon!
We all carry weapons and as a martial artist, I know this to be true. I've spoken with my classes about how different parts of our body can be used as weapons and I've also spoken to them about the traditional weaponry that people might use to attack you. So in this book, I wanted to use that same traditional weaponry as something a little more common. So on Linsora's home planet of Khizara, everyone uses knives. They are apart of everyday life and children are trained to use them. Permac's society does not use knives and he's trying to understand the logic and reasoning behind it all. Enjoy this short excerpt from "Khizara" and see what you think!
We all have different things that amuse us. Personally, I'm amused very easily having been a father for years and years and mostly, because I'm a guy and will probably never grow up. As a result, I find numerous situations slightly more than silly and laugh at almost everything! Being that way I have endowed many of my characters, including Permac, with that same trait. In this case he's very amused with a woman who has been in jail for some time and is now out on a shopping spree. He finds her enthusiasm and animated actions to be something worth hiding his laughter about. See what you think and please consider reading the rest of the book, coming soon to Amazon, Nook< Kobo and Apple!
It's hard to leave a place where you have become comfortable. Even if you grumble and complain about the conditions, the rent, the neighbors or a myriad of other evils when the time comes to leave, you still feel that ache and pang that this place, regardless of how dismal, was still where you called home for so long. In this passage, Permac and Linsora are about to leave the place where Permac had called home for a short time while caring for Linsora, who was in prison. Now, he's taking one last look and the sentiment of the moment touches him. Please enjoy this excerpt and consider reading "Khizara" the second edition of book one in the Tokorel series!
I had these words spoken to me once by a very angry woman. She stood in front me while I was seated at a table in a science fiction convention. To make matters worse, she was dressed in very convincing Klingon make-up and outfit, complete with weapons. Although I tried to feign ignorance, she saw through me and knew that I had, indeed, had her confined to a small jail cell, for $5, to help a charity. Thus began our writing partnership and what would become the opening line to an incredible series. Please enjoy these two paragraphs, humbly offered, and please consider reviewing, "Khizara".
Working Title: The Imagination Stone
This Book Is In Development
Tom Parker is about to lose everything, when he finds a legendary stone that unlocks his child-like imagination and takes him on a roller coaster ride toward success. As Tom prepares to make the presentation of his life, he realizes that the stone has been stolen. It's all or nothing as his team and the love of his life look on, hoping for a miracle!
Concern can be generated by a look, a touch, or certainly by the tone of a voice. Have you ever heard someone call your name and you immediately knew that the encounter was not to be a pleasant one? I hope that you'll find this short excerpt intriguing and that you'll consider reading my book, "The Imagination Stone" when you have some time. Thank you!
When your boss catches you saying something that you really didn't want him to hear you saying, and then he confronts you, there is no escape. It's a slow death. It's the kind of death where you just want to crawl into a hole and pretend that it never will happen. This short excerpt from my book, "The Imagination Stone" will take you to that place of no return. Please enjoy!
There are many things in life that we believe will make wishes come true. A shooting star, a wishbone, throwing a coin in a fountain, and other things. What if we found one thing that really did make wishes come true? Not just because we wished it to be so, but through our efforts. Would you ever let such an object go? This short excerpt will give you some insite into the world of Tom Parker and his gift from the sea. Please enjoy "The Imagination Stone".
When I think about the head of a company, I typically think about a person in a business suit and very stiff. That's the way I grew up. In recent years, I've seen the heads of large companies becoming more loose and relaxed and it shows how successful a company can be when the leader can have a little fun! In this excerpt from "The Imagination Stone" (coming to internet shelves near you in October 2020) Tom, the head of an advertising firm is about to shock and surprise his team. He's gone from being way too serious to...take a look and see for yourself! This is sure to be one of the best feel good stories of the decade!
"The Imagination Stone" is a wonderful fantasy. It has villains, heroes, romance, suspense, kids, crayons, and laughter. This excerpt is part of the villain side. It's introducing the bad guy and how his workers feel about him. Have you ever had a boss that you know should just NOT be running the company? Have you ever feared for your job on a daily basis wondering why you stay? Take a look at this short excerpt and see if you can relate. Watch for this amazing story to be released October 1, 2020 and see one good thing to come out of this year! Thanks!
We have all received bad news at one time or another. It's never a good feeling. It's especially disheartening when you've called to relay some good news, but receive the bad news in return. In this short excerpt from my book, "The Imagination Stone" the main character, Tom, is speaking with his childhood friend, Gill, who works at the bank. He's called with some great news about his business but receives a cold response. Unknown to Tom is that Gill's boss is standing over him at the time. I hope that you enjoy this excerpt and please watch for the release of "The Imagination Stone" October 1, 2020.
The Imagination Stone is a stone of unknown origin. Michelangelo first discovers the stone on his way to Rame before he creates some of the greatest masterpieces the world has ever known. When he left Rome, he threw the stone into the sea. What happened to the stone after that has been a mystery until now. Please enjoy this short excerpt from my book, The Imagination Stone. A book for all ages. You're going to love it!
Three-year-old Julie has a secret which she has been told NOT to tell. If she tells, her mommy will be hurt terribly. Secrets in the head of a three year old, however, are like thinking that the sun will forever hide behind the clouds. Eventually, they will both come out, and when Julie’s secret does come out it tears apart two families while bringing them closer together at the same time. “The Monster’s Lap” is a real story based on the life mis- fortunes and betrayals of a young three-year-old girl and the family that loves her. You will have an intimate look into the ups and downs of this family as well as the little known process that goes on from discovery to the final verdict in court. Can a three-year-old express what has happened in her life enough to convince the District Attorney to take on this case, or will the word of a well spoken, well liked thirty-year-old man be more believable? “She can hardly talk. I didn’t do anything and after all, who would believe a three-year-old?”
It's hard to do the right thing sometimes, but not when you're used to doing the wrong thing all of the time. When you have good intentions but you never follow through with them, life has a way of causing you, forcing you, to do the right thing. If you're wanted by the law for crimes committed, and you've decided to turn yourself in, it's usually the best thing to do. Putting it off can bring grave consequences. I hope that you enjoy this short excerpt from my book, "The Monster's Lap" and that you'll consider purchasing a copy. You can't make up real life!
When speaking to the police, it's never a good idea to lie. Not only is it a felony to lie to the police, but they will often ask if you would be willing to take a lie detector test. What would you say, if you knew that you were lying? How would you get yourself out of that situation? Please read this excerpt from my book, "The Monster's Lap" and let me know if I can help you understand if something like this is going on in your life! I want this book to help you.
It was difficult for me to write this book. These things that happened in my life, to my kids and grandkids, made it hard to relive each moment, but I felt that it was a story that needed to come out in the open. So many times these things happen to families, and so many times they are covered up and the stories are never told. The cycle continues. This was just a small turning point in the story, but a turning point none the less. Please read this short excerpt from "The Monster's Lap" and let me know if I can answer any questions. Let's stop this cycle of abuse!
We all go about our daily routines, our life happenings, our sun-up to sun down. Sometimes we encounter slight hiccups in our days, we deal with them, and we move on. The Monster's Lap is about a sexual abuse case that happened within a family. When the grandparents are alerted by the police that they will be caring for their 3 year old granddaughter, and that court hearings will begin the following day, their lives will be interrupted on a regular basis for months. See how you would handle this situation in this short excerpt from, "The Monster's Lap". I am always happy to answer questions or speak at your organization if you need more information. Thanks!
When asexual assault takes place and when the perpetrator is revealed, there eventually has to be a trial. The fact is that there will be many trials and several hearings. Many times, the perpetrator and his attorney, attempt to file for delays. Sometimes they are successful. How doe this affect the families of the victim? How does the prosecution deal with this? Please take a look at this excerpt and if this interests you please purchase your copy of “The Monster’s Lap”. Thank you!
As you might imagine, when a crime has been committed the police need statements. Sometimes those come in the form of a formal interview at the station. It's rare for the police to be interviewing one person, wanting to interview a second, only to have that second person waiting outside. Take a look at this excerpt and see what strange twists and turns this tory, a real life story, took over time. Pray that no one you love ever sits on "The Monster's Lap".
When I was younger, my generation sometimes told "white lies" or statements that were not quite the truth but not a lie that would hurt anyone. As I've grown I've come to realize that there is no such thing as a "little white lie". It's fairly black and white. It's true or it's not. So people learn to twist the truth so that they believe what they say is true, even though the facts indicate otherwise. But if we listen closely, we hear the thin fabric of a story unravel before us. Please enjoy this short excerpt from my book, "The Monster's Lap" and if it intrigues you, please consider purchasing a copy. Thank you!
Often, things happen in our lives due to things that are done by people and not fate or luck. When bad things happen we look for somewhere, or some one, to which we can lay blame. We often look everywhere else before turning out sights inward. We never want to blame ourselves, but sometimes, that is where the blame lies. Please read this short passage from my book, "The Monster's Lap" and see what I mean. If you are intrigued, please consider purchasing a copy. I'd really appreciate it! Thanks.
What do you do when you realize that an emergency is under way? How do you react? What if a loved one was threatened? What if you needed to get to them immediately? Would you remain calm? Would you panic? Please read this short excerpt from my book, "The Monster's Lap" and see how you would feel. Please consider purchasing a copy to support those who help protect our children against child abuse. Thank you.
In this story and in particular, this excerpt, the judge has heard a great amount of evidence from a number of people, and now she is about to rule as to whether Charles will remain in jail or go free. This is a point in time when everyone, the accused and the family are all on pins and needles. Will this man go free or will he remain behind bars? Please read this short excerpt and consider purchasing "The Monster's Lap" to help support organizations that prevent child abuse!
This book was difficult for me to write. As a parent, I love my kids, I love my grandkids and I hate the thought of anything happening to any of them. In this scene, Doug is being asked questions in court, and reliving a short conversation between he and his granddaughter. It summed up what this three year old girls was feeling, and the words that came out of her mouth were ones that no child should ever feel comfortable saying.
The Monster's Lap is a book to let people know that sexual assault happens in many homes, and not just one. It happens to many people, not just one. It can be stopped. The beginning of the book sets the stage for what is to come. Please read this book bubble and consider reading, the Monster's Lap. A portion of the book sales goes to the 28 Hours of Hope, a Northern Colorado non-profit organization that raises money to help advocacy centers for children to help stop child abuse.
Book three in the Tokorel series. After ten years of bliss and happiness, not having to think about anywhere else in the universe, Permac and Linsora suddenly find themselves thinking about Linsora's home world of Khizara, and a desire to return there. What they don't know is that leaving their home will take them on a chase across space when their son is kidnapped and taken from planet to planet being touted by his kidnappers as the savior to end all suffering and misery. Tokor's fulfillment of the prophesy of peace. Wars begin. Evil returns. Will all be lost and will this be the end of the series?
I've always felt that dreams were a link to some part of our lives. The future? The past? The spirit world? Or is it just our brains trying to work through the day and solve the issues that we're most concerned about, but doing so in a bizarre and distorted way? Not being a professional in that field, I really don't know. But it's fun to speculate and makeup the rules as I go along. So in this small snippet from book 3, Linsora had been unconscious and during that time, she had a dream. Now she wants to know what it all meant, and will find out with the help of her Aunt. You'll get a taste but won't find out unless you read the book. In the meantime, please enjoy!
We each have moments of realization in our lives. It that one point in time when everything comes together. Our brain processes all of the major points of the situation and we can feel a multitude of grand reactions; relief, satisfaction, happiness and hope. We can also suddenly be hit with fear, doubt, despair and hopelessness. When I wrote about his meeting, where many characters were talking about the events leading up to where they were at this point in time, one character, Permac, has a moment of realization. I've had many of these throughout my life and have felt what my character was feeling at this point in time. See if you've ever experienced such feelings and if you can relate. Most of all, enjoy!
Some things strike fear in the hearts of the bravest souls. In the Tokorel series I have created a villain that is so insidious that his very name will make you shake. In book 2 he is trapped inside his own head, but it book 3 it is eluded to that he might be free from that internal prison. Is it true? Is he free to do his evil again? What about the people who might stand in his way? More importantly, what about the people who helped to imprison him? Take a look at this excerpt and please consider reading the Tokorel series. You might enjoy it!
The characters in the Tokorel series are diverse and extreme. They range from evil to very good (with flaws, as we all have) and from weak to very strong willed. My characters like to tell stories and reminisce and, in this way, they can fill in you, the reader, on back stories that happened when I, the writer, wasn't present. So in this particular section, a story is being told that surprises our hero and hopefully you, the reader. To find out more please go to Tokorel.com or purchase your own copy of "The Eyes of Tokorel" series!
As Linsora and Permac were, once again, preparing to leave for Khizara (actually, Permac's first time!) we needed to set the scene for what was going on there and what had happened during the couple's 10 year absence. So having Moragh explain what he had seen, and from his point of view, seemed to be the best way to do that. He is acting as the memory that needed to be there. When we think about places from our past, especially from 10 years ago, we tend to embellish what really happened and that embellishment could be good or bad depending on how we choose to remember. Please see what you think Moragh's state of mind was with this short excerpt from book 3!
I don't know of anyone who doesn't from time to time, find a reason to disagree with someone else. I certainly don't know any families who can claim that they've never had at least a small tiff with another family member. It's human nature and can be connected with something as small as a poor night's sleep or missing a meal. Our emotional states are fragile at best and can be upset by very small things. But what if the family quarrel is intentional. Something to use as a teaching tool. And what if this learning moment involves knives? Such is the case between Linsora and her ten year old son, Tozar. It's a ritual that must be carried out. Find out more about the rituals of Khizara at tokorel.com or by reading the Tokorel series of books.
We all experience rituals as we grow. We might not consider them to be ritualistic in nature, but our parents tend to do things that their parents did, passing those small habits on to us. We, in turn, pass them along to our children. They bring us a sense of familiar comfort as we age, go out on our own, and progress in life. They are part of our individual lessons that show us how things should be, whether good or bad, in the way we were raised. It's then up to us to modify these rituals to fit our own sense of morality and comfort levels. Coming from two completely different cultures, Permac and Linsora are constantly learning about each other. Some things are easy to accept, while others, not so much. Learn more at Tokorel.com or buy you copies of "The Eyes of Tokorel" trilogy today.
Silence can mean good and bad things both. When asking for an honest answer, silence can mean a broken heart, a loss of trust or suspicions. When asking about the honest answer to a grand surprise, silence can be all revealing. Silence. After a bit of shocking news, silence can smother the inhabitants of the room in which the silence is laid. How can silence create such feelings; such emotions? On Tokorel, emotions are not private as they are here. Silence. On Tokorel, does it mean nothing or everything? Learn more about Tokorel at Tokorel.com or read the books in the Tokorel series yourself!
We all have secrets. They are the small parts of us that remain ours. They are the things that we keep locked away inside of us. Some are only minor and insignificant pieces of the puzzle that make up our lives, while others can be dark and cavernous, consuming us until we find that one person to tell. Other, less innocuous secrets are things that we hind from those close to us in an effort to spare their feelings or keep them from hurting ours. At times, some secrets must be revealed, however, and when we final choke out those words, we wait in anticipation of what the receiver will tell us. Take a look at this excerpt and see how it unfolds.
In our lives, we have confrontations. I probably have more than many working security for Macy's and stopping shoplifters often. Many of us, however, find that we are often confronting our friends or family about petty things. In the Tokorel universe, where the Khizarans settle things with knives, and the Tokorellans use their mental trickery to settle arguments confrontation between the two can become a full blown battle. Here is a short excerpt where such a confrontation occurs and is intense, but short. Learn more about the Tokorel Universe and the people in it by reading the trilogy or go to tokorel.com for a peek!
What do you think of when you hear the word, "surprise"? Do you think of people jumping out and yelling the word just before the start of a party? Do you think about driving down the road when red and blue lights suddenly appear behind you? The point is, there are good and bad surprises. Many times, we hope that our surprise will be looked at as a good one, but the one receiving it sees it as just the opposite. Such is the case with Permac and Linsora, and in this segment, Permac is hoping to present a pleasant surprise to his mate, but her reaction makes him wary. Take a look at this excerpt and find out more at tokorel.com
When the truth is not known, and someone has been missing for a long time, it can raise a number of suspicions and accusations when the lack of presence is associated with numerous bad happening. Take a look at this excerpt and see what I mean.
We sometimes rush into a situation. Often we can figure out a way to leave unscathed. Sometimes, though, we aren't as lucky. Sometimes we rush in and after a moment, life fades to black...
My characters, like me, can sometimes be not as patient as they should be. But, it seems that they are always rewarded for their waiting time. In this particular passage, it's not only the way that I feel sometimes, but the way that my characters must accept what lies ahead! Enjoy.
We all know that rumors are things that can't easily be stopped. When evil decides to spread rumors and use the crowd reaction to meet their own ends, then deceit enters the picture. But an evil person in a trusted position isn't always detected until the damage has been done. My evil characters are sneaky and vile. Take a short read and see what I mean.
There are some things that happen everyday but we don't like to think about. There are some times when we've been told that at night, there's a good possiblility that we've swallowed a spider or that we've eaten some other bug at one time or another. It makes us gag. But what if someone told you that all of your life you've ben eating bugs? That's what I've decided to do in this, and a previous book, to poor Permac.
Many families fight. Not many like this.
I love surprises, unlike Linsora. I love to write surprises into my stories, and this book is filled with them. If you've followed the series, you'll be familiar with a couple of names, and this will peak your curiosity. Things are progressing in the Tokorel universe, and you'll be drawn in to an entirely new and ever changing world. This book sets the stage for book 4 which is underway even now. What happens next? Time will tell.
Linsora has had to leave friends, family and her home on numerous occasions, and it never seems to get any easier. I want my characters to seem real and so I take experiences from my past and project them into the situations that my characters are experiencing. Linsora's friend, Behazh, tries to comfort her before she leaves. She's tough, but has a soft side that is ever present.
In book 3, the familiar elements that you've experienced from the first two books are present with some new twists. In this part of the book, I'm introducing the new antics of some old enemies. Life for our heroes continues to evolve, but where will it take them? You are really going to enjoy book 3 in the Tokorel series!
In the first 2 Tokorel books, I showed how emotional Linsora is. I wanted to continue that right off the bat in book 3. Even though it's been 10 years since the adventures ended in book 2, I wanted to make it evident that Linsora hasn't changed that much. She's changed as much as a person normally would in 10 years, but she's becoming restless and entering an awakening period. She's gaining a realizations of...something that she can't quite grasp yet. Welcome to book 3 of the Tokorel series!
In book one of the Gary and Stacy Winslow series, “Tears of the Silent Crow” you had the opportunity to meet this adventurous and fun loving couple and learned about their love of life and their ability to solve mysteries. Now in the second book, “The Compass Society” things have changed just a little. Stacy has been missing for six months. Not only has Gary not been able to find her, but he’s being blamed for her disappearance. His life is at an all time low. He’s lost everything, and now he’s considering the ultimate loss, taking his own life. He gives it one last try, however, and is recruited by an age old organization known as The Compass Society. The Society claims that there is no such thing as good fortune, luck or coincidence. Every person receives what they deserve according to a centuries old plan, and what they get is a result of the Society’s intervention. Gary has twenty-four hours to decide if he wants to join, and finds out some remarkable things during this decision period. Now he must decide if this organization will really be the salvation of mankind, or the cause of humanity’s ultimate demise, and at the same time, find the love of his life. The Compass Society will have you asking yourself questions about life that you only thought you knew the answers to. Join the Winslows as they solve the mystery of, “The Compass Society”.
I have been to plenty of job interviews in my life, and I remember that the ones that made me the most nervous were the ones that I really needed! Oddly enough, the ones that I didn't really need were the ones that I did the best on. In this short excerpt from "The Compass Society" Gary is flustered by the odd conditions of this interview. Not only that, but it reminds him of when he and his late wife first met. Take a quick read and see what you think about this scene and if it interests you please consider purchasing a copy of my book. Thank you!
I am not a best selling author...yet. I have had publisher after publisher send me the form "rejection" letter. My book sales have never been enough for me to retire. So why do I keep writing? I love to write! Writing, for me, is an escape. It's a way to tell the world that I have weird and wild imaginations to release. Writing relaxes me, and I've had many wonderful reviews from fans who have read my books. Now I'm at an age where I can devote more time to writing, promoting, selling, and inviting you to read my offerings. It's like someone set an alarm and it's time to wake up! Much like this excerpt, the alarm came probably before I was ready, but now my heart is thumping and my adrenaline is pumping and I'm ready. I don't care what the publishers say, it's time to go! Please read this short excerpt from my book, "The Compass Society" and see if you can relate to this feeling! Thanks.
"The Compass Society" addresses a number of things, quite subtly most of the time, that can apply to the fantasy world in which it's written, but also to the world around us. In this excerpt one man is being falsely accused of an event. Someone steps in on his behalf. An explanation is offered and a life lesson is given. See if you agree or disagree with the explanation and take a look at purchasing a copy of this book. I'd really appreciate it!
When you complete a project, whether for work or something personal, are you always completely confident in your workmanship? I know that when I finish something, I must go over it again with a fine tooth comb, in order to ensure that nothing will go wrong. In my book, "The Compass Society" one of the main characters, Gary Winslow, is a computer programmer. He has been asked to create a program that will emulate the emotions of people. He's just completed the program but hasn't had a chance to test it yet, when his boss starts making demands. Please enjoy reading this short excerpt and if you find it intriguing, please consider purchasing a copy. Thank you.
We all overhear conversations. Sometimes, we continue to listen while other times the words fade away, never to be remembered. But what if you suddenly realized that the stranger, whose conversation you just heard, had to do with you? What if it was about you? What if this person, whom you had never met, was telling someone that they were looking for you? Would you admit who you were? Would you quietly move along, hoping that you weren't noticed? Please enjoy this short excerpt from my book, "Compass Society" and see what you think. Have fun!
Have you ever felt like others have all the luck, and you aren't meant to win that number, or get the door prize, or that promotion? Have you ever wondered if there is someone or something that controls who gets that? Gary is about to find out that the Compass Society has been responsible for his good, and bad, luck. In fact, he's about to learn that the Society is responsible for many things in this world and has been for years. Could this be real? Please read this short excerpt from my book, "The Compass Society" and see what you think.
Every moment of every day we make decisions. Some are small and seem almost insignificant. Others are seemingly huge and cause us to worry about what will happen regardless of what we choose. We always want the best for ourselves and those around us. We never want to make the wrong choice. We are often given guidance which, sometimes, appears to be of no help whatsoever. Please read this short excerpt and see if you feel this advice would be helpful or not. And if this intrigues you, then please consider purchasing a copy of my book, "The Compass Society" and let me know what you think.
Have you ever felt like you were stuck between the opinions of two people? Has it ever felt like you couldn't move without something bad happening as a result? We often find ourselves the arbitrator of an argument or disagreement between two friends. But what if you became the person caught between two groups of people? What if your very life depended on what you did next? Please enjoy this short excerpt from my book, "The Compass Society" and if it intrigues you, please consider purchasing a copy. Thanks!
We have all grown up in a world where certain rules apply. Rain falls down from the sky. The sun is hot. Snow is cold. Wind can be gentle or destroy. But what if all of that suddenly changed? What if the world, where you grew up, changed over night? You know how it should be, but it's not. How would you react? Please read this short excerpt from my book, "The Compass Society" and see if it intrigues you. If it does, I hope that you'll consider purchasing a copy. Thanks!
I have found myself, from time to time, so involved with an item, that I can't seem to take myself away from it. Maybe the beauty of it captures my gaze. Perhaps the shear hideous nature of the scene doesn't allow me to turn away. There are many reasons. In this short excerpt, Gary sees something that he's never witnessed, and can't seem to take his eyes from it even though danger is close! Please enjoy this passage from my book, "The Compass Society" and if it intrigues you, please consider purchasing a copy. I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!
Have you ever wondered where our race is headed? Are humans headed toward extinction? What if our own creations were the cause of our future demise? In trying to guide society to a utopia, we might just be walking down the road to ruin. Please check out this short excerpt from my book, "The Compass Society" and see what you think. And if this intrigues you, won't you please consider purchasing a copy? Thanks!
Have you ever been in a position where you've done something that was almost heroic, and yet you are blamed for doing something unthinkable? Ok, maybe not to that extreme, but I certain that someone has blamed you for something that you didn't do. Please take a look at the excerpt from my book, "The Compass Society" and see what you think. If you enjoy it, please consider purchasing a copy. I would appreciate it! Thank you.
It has always been my contention that every act that we perform, no matter how big or small, has an affect on everything around us. To do nothing is to do something, so even just sitting quietly can reach millions. In the excerpt the main character comes to that realization regarding his new job. Is what he's doing going to cause millions to suffer? Please consdier reading "Compass Society" and let me know what you think!
I have a hunger to someday make a good living from my writing. It hasn't happened yet and so, just like someone who hasn't eaten in a while, my hunger continues to grow. In this excerpt, Gary hasn't eaten a good meal in a long time, and he's ready for one. He's just found a one-hundred dollar bill in the street and he's off to enjoy his meal, but just like life, something happens. See what you think as you read this short excerpt from "The Compass Society".
I believe that life, if we look closely at events, has a way of telling us things that are about to happen. We feel this in our gut and show it when we "feel" that something isn't quite right or that something good is about to happen. In celebration of those feelings, I started this scene with some foreboding and preparation. Will it all pan out or will it be found out? Please take a look at this bookbubble excerpt and see what you think, and please consider reading, "The Compass Society" available on Amazon.
I've always wanted to have it all. Being rich and famous is something that I aspire to daily, but as with many of us, it eludes me. I decided, when I was a kid, that I really wanted for people to know who I was and what I did. I just can't seem to find that path that will lead me there. It's weird. So, I attempt to give those opportunities to my characters and then see where it leads them. Perhaps subconsciously I'm afraid that once fame and fortune hits it won't be all I hoped, and it sometimes is reflected that way in my stories. Gary and Stacy have an interesting life, and right now Gary is finding it even more so. I hope that you enjoy this excerpt.
In my life I've had moments when everything just seemed a mess. Each moment appeared to not be conjoined to the next but instead should have been in a different timeline completely. People would say things that had absolutely no meaning whatsoever, and action would occur that made me doubt my sanity. Ever had one of those days? Well, if you have then you'll relate to this bookbubble. If you haven't, then step into this crazy world and maybe read it twice.At the very least enjoy this excerpt fro, "Compass Society".
I full-time job causes me to deal with shoplifters and the police on almost a daily basis. It's an amazing thing. I watch the police officers ask questions, sometimes trust more than I would but quite often find out more than I would! It's really interesting to watch and I often feel badly for the officers realizing that they see this on a daily basis. All of this helps me and inspired me to write this particular scene. Of course this is just a small excerpt, but you'll get the idea I'm sure. So read and enjoy and I hope that you'll consider taking a look at the rest of The Compass Society!
We meet people everyday and we need to make instant decisions on how much we wish to tell, or not tell these people about our lives. Some of us have certain instincts that we fall back on while others don't have the gut feeling and tend to say either everything or nothing. I've always trusted my instincts and have the characters in my books do the same. I must say that there have been times in my life when I've been disappointed and my characters reflect that as well. In this short excerpt you'll see what I mean, but you won't know what the outcome is. (Sorry!) But I hope that it will entice you to think about reading, "The Compass Society" sometime soon!
In the Gary and Stacy Winslow series, I tried to pattern the couple after my wife and I. We have an amazing relationship! In fact, I can't imagine what life would be like without her, but I tried to do just that in the opening of The Compass Society. Gary has run out of luck and life holds little meaning anymore. I've always held on to the hope that each day will be better, and so does Gary. He hopes, but his hope is running out as well. See what you think about this excerpt and please consider reading "The Compass Society"! Who knows, you might like it!
I've experienced it in my own life and I'm sure you have as well. You go from the incredible high and hit the ground like a passenger in a plane crash. We hit those highs and lows for various reasons and many times, they're different for us all. The story of The Compass Society starts out focusing on Gary Winslow. His wife has disappeared and no one seems to be able to find her. After a year of an amazing marriage, she just vanishes. Now, three months after the incident, Gary has lost almost everything else that made him, and his life, the joyful experience that it was. Please enjoy this excerpt, feel free to let me know what you think by emailing me (firstname.lastname@example.org) and please consider reading this exciting book.
Have you ever had a time when the way you have to dress for work just makes you want to go back to being a child? I wanted for Gary to show that deep in his heart, he was like this. Even though society dictates that one must dress as nicely as possible for a job interview, Gary found that wearing his dress shoes were not comfortable. So he decides to remove them to continue his walk. Doing this not only made him feel better physically, but made him feel closer to his missing wife. See what you think and then please read, "The Compass Society" to finish exciting your imagination!
People have their own thoughts about life and luck. Some people think that only others have the best luck. I feel that we make our own luck based on what we know, what we learn and how we use that knowledge. But I wanted my character of Gary Winslow, to associate his luck with the one person who gave him confidence, love and happiness. Those three things make a person feel great about themselves. This short excerpt explains why he felt the way that he did. I hope that you enjoy and to find out more, please purchase your copy on amazon.com
Have you ever had someone do something for you that is incredibly nice, and you find yourself questioning the motive? I mean, I try to never question when someone does something nice for me, but every now and then I get a feeling like it's just not our of the kindness of their heart that makes this particular person act as they do. So, here sit Gary and Stacy. Gary is about to accept a job with the same company that Stacy works for. His future boss is already kind to a fault, but now he is offering something before the job is even underway. Sounds almost too good to be true, and you know what is said about those situations. Please enjoy this excerpt from The Compass Society.
With time and distance things and people lose their importance in our minds. Sometimes, our memories either raise something or someone to sainthood or banish them from our minds all-together. In this excerpt, Gary runs into an old friend. He literally runs into her on the street. The only problem is, Char doesn't recognize Gary as the person with whom she attended high school. When Gary asks personal questions, Char becomes defensive. How would you act? How would you want to be treated? Read and let me know! Enjoy.
Ever had one of those days where nothing can go wrong? One of those days where you are just on top of the world and everything that you touch turns to gold? That's the kind of day that Gary is having, and even though he's not sure why, he's certainly not complaining! In this short segment, Gary is about to have the first real meal in a long time. Not only that, but it's the second thing today that indicates how his luck might be changing. He's amazed at what's going on and although he chalks it up to a change in his luck, he will soon find that luck isn't all we think it is. Curious? Read The Compass Society to learn more!
When we are used to living, used to life and people and fun and celebration. We don't do well when it suddenly and without purpose, ends. The Winslows are an amazing couple and the envy of everyone they meet, but when Stacy disappears, Gary's world stops suddenly. Like being on any ride which stops suddenly, Gary felt like he was being thrown through the windshield of a car. The rest of his days were spent in desperate searching and attempts to find the woman that he was meant to be with for all time. So here he is, on a typical day without his one love. See if you've ever felt this way. Then check out "The Compass Society" and experience a world of the future that, in part, we hope never comes true.
Have you ever had that morning when you were looking forward to sleeping in only to have your alarm clock suddenly and surprisingly, go off? Do you recall trying to turn off the alarm in a vain effort to silence the interruption to your rest? Your hand flailed. Your heart pounded. Your adrenaline pulsed through your veins. How could sleep ever come to you again? After all of that, what if your phone unexpectedly rang, just as you were trying to fall back into dreamland? I invite you to read about what happened to one person and feel his pain. Read more about Gary's adventures in "The Compass Society" and other books in his series.
It's happened to each of us. We have all gone into the situation where we are interviewed for a new job and then given the opportunity to accept the offer or at least think about it before we accept or decline. At that point, we are generally asked if we have any questions about the job. But what if we aren't asked that? What if we aren't even presented an opportunity to ask. Would you speak up? Would you want to know more than what you have been presented? Would you be able to turn the tables and create a situation where your prospective employer is telling you more than you had hoped about your job? Gary was able to do this. See what happens.
On a daily basis we face surprises. Some are huge and ones that we never forget. These are both good and bad. Some are just small and insignificant. These are the ones that make no impact on our memories and we let them become absorbed into the fading memories of the past. The big ones. The ones that burn into our minds, are the ones that cause us to reflect on our lives and sometimes, who we are and much about our existence. These are the ones that can sometimes make a huge difference in the directions that we take. Gary found that such a surprise was waiting for him an a plain, unassuming room with a blackboard. Read and see what you think!
Have you ever had one of those times when something seems to happen so fast, that it's hard to catch your breath? It's happened to me and I'm certain, to many others. If it's happened to many, and it might be a common thing, then it's something that readers can relate to. So, sadly for my character, he had to go through it too. Take a look at what Gary is experiencing and then read books one and two in the adventures of Gary and Stacy Winslow.
The one person that you don't want to lie to is your future employer, but we often will gloss over the truth when we are speaking to them in an interview. Gary is trying to negotiate a few things with the man who will be hiring him. He's trying to set things up so that he has more influence over what he will be doing. Little does he know, he's dealing with someone who knows much more than he thinks he knows. His confidence, however, has not yet been quashed. See if you can guess what happens next and then read, "The Compass Society" to see if you're right!
The person that you love has vanished without a trace. The police suspect fowl play and even worse, they suspect you. After several months the heat is turned down. But, in your effort to clear your name and find your spouse, you pretty much lose everything. You feel as if your luck is ruined and your life is a shambles, until one day, things begin to turn around and, in the midst of all of this, your true love suddenly and mysteriously returns. How would you react? Take a look at how Gary reacts to this in this short excerpt from "The Compass Society" courtesy of me and Bublish!
I think about life when I think about what my characters should go through. Their lives have to reflect events and situations that could happen in our lives, in order for my readers to be able to relate. Gary has been out of work for a long time and is about to lose everything, that is until he finds an ad for, what he hopes, will be his dream job. When he arrives at the building the physical appearance of the building isn't anything like he imagined that it would be. What will happen? How will it turn out? Read this short excerpt and, if you find yourself intrigued, get a Kindle copy for less than $3. Then let me know what you think!
We all seem to become involved in things that we enjoy, sometimes beyond what we really should. We let time slip away, and forget about things that we need to do. It's the same with my characters and, in this case, Gary has been absorbed in his work and wants to finish it up, but his wants are vetoed by his boss and his wife. Have you ever been in a position like this?
Gary is considering joining an organization that has been around for centuries, but few have heard about. He's not certain that he wants to become part of it, but he's promised not only good pay, but incredible "luck" such as he's never seen. To show him what he has in store, many wonderful things have happened to him in the past few hours. Now, as he arrives home, there is another incredible surprise waiting. See what you think that you would do in Gary's shoes.
Gary and Stacy, if you don't know by now, have an amazing relationship. Now that they will be working for the same company, it will be interesting to see how they manage to separate their home activities from their time at work. Bringing work home, however, is inevitable and in this moment from the book, Gary hasn't actually started with the company yet, so he's asking a few questions about what to expect.
What do you do when you're accused of kidnapping and assault? What would you do if you didn't do it and the police not only have you in custody, but you've been held by someone that you don't even know, and a woman is screaming at you and a young child, whose life you just saved, is crying out of control? Take a look and see what happens in this scene that sets the stage for so much more to come!
I've always loved "Alice in Wonderland" and bring it up from time to time in my books. This is one section where I did this and it really seemed to work. Gary is very nervous about this visit to a new company. The nervousness is compounded by the fact the the building he's entered is quiet, not as well lit as most and just plain creepy! He begins to imagine things and compares where he is to a childhood story that would give him joy when he was younger. A little comic relief within the story more for the character than for the reader. Please enjoy this small excerpt.
Gary has been alone for months. His wife has been missing. He has been blamed. He has lost almost everything. So now his mind begins to look into the past to find some solace, but not his past. He looks into the past of the television shows that he grew up with which, eventually, brings him back to reality. Have a read and enjoy!
When we lose someone close to us, the memories can take us to places that we long for. Dreams can do even more, evoking those strong emotions that only dreams and reality can bring out in us. It's different when we sit and think. We experience a sadness or longing, but those emotions of that person being right there just don't feel as strong. So when Gary dreams of his wife, who has been missing for months, those emotions are there in the morning, and his day begins in a depressed funk. See what I mean but please try to enjoy!
Gary and Stacy have this really wonderful relationship. It's an amazing relationship of which many people would be envious. Even when they're joking around, the old adage applies, "Many a true word is spoken in jest," and when they do, indeed, jest with one another, they needs be careful about the outcome. I take time in each word and each interaction between these two, to reinforce the fact that they are a wonderful couple meant for each other. Please read and enjoy!
Just a quick romantic moment to end your evening. Please enjoy!
When things begin to go bad, there are people who can make it feel like it will never get better. In this segment, I showed how this could happen. It would certainly make me uncomfortable. Take a look, see what you think and enjoy!
Gary and Stacy are very committed to each other and errors happen. At this point in time, The receptionist seems to have an attraction to Gary, and when Gary and Stacy shows up together, she realizes that she never took the time to ask if Gary was married before she let her feelings take over. Now she's learning this fact for the first time, and it's, well, not good! Enjoy!
Gary lost Stacy about 6 months ago. He's been accused of having something to do with her disappearance, but in reality, he knows nothing about where she went. So when he thinks that he sees her, he runs out of the restaurant to try and find her. Now he's run into a woman who is scolding him about his actions. For the first time in six months he's made a woman smile, but where will this lead? Enjoy!
As the story continued and Gary was given 24 hours to make the decision of whether he wanted to join the Society or not. It had been a long time since he had eaten a decent meal. He just left his interview and turned back to the building to see it empty. I wanted to make this old business an enigma and force Gary to think about what was going on. Take a quick look and please, enjoy the read while thinking about where Gary might go from here!
The Compass Society has some amazing technology, including technology that some of those working there have no idea about. Stacy and Gary are about to learn about something that they haven't been told before, but now is not the best time for them to learn. I wanted to show that the Society was able to separate them at any time that they chose. Please enjoy!
In this segment I wanted to give some insight into Stacy's personality and how Gary feels about it. This shows how she thinks and how she figures out how to solve big problems. I always try to express these types of things in just a few sentences, and I believe that I was pretty successful in what you are going to read here. Please enjoy!
In this section of the book, I wanted to create curiosity not only for the reader, but in Gary's mind as well. He has just arrived at the Compass Society to apply for a job and he notices, right off the bat, that a few things just aren't right. I had the feeling while writing this part, that he had just fell down the rabbit's hole in Alice in Wonderland, and that perhaps he might think the same. But see what you feel when reading this and above all, enjoy!
One of the things that Gary is leery of in his new job, is how much power and control the company has over his life both at work and when he's away. Gary sometimes forgets about it while he's programming and absorbed in his work, but little moments snap him back to reality. I wanted to create an ultimate experience to demonstrate this, and here is what I came up with. Please take a look and let me know what you think. Did I convey this in such a way that you too are irritated at Gary's boss? Enjoy!
Gary is having an interesting time at this particular point in his life. He's enjoying his new job, but doesn't enjoy the power that it appears they have over him. He's liking the challenge, but wonders about way the company is run and most of all, about his safety. So, paranoia is beginning to set in. Here is a scene where a stranger stops to help him, but then Gary realizes that this guy isn't a stranger after all! Please enjoy! If you'd like to share your thoughts with me please contact me at: email@example.com
In this book, Gary, a computer programmer, has just learned that this new company that he's working for, uses what they call, "the stream" to allow their workers to program. The stream interacts directly with your mind and Gary is finding out that it's becoming addictive. I wanted to point out that as so many addicts realize, what he was experiencing wasn't real, although he begins to rationalize as well. See what I mean in this short excerpt, and enjoy!
When I first started writing about the Compass Society, I wanted to make it impressive. It was, after all, a very old establishment and being exclusive and secret, it's had the opportunity to recruit only the brightest and best. As a result I wanted to show that they were years ahead of anything we could imagine technologically, so I came to this scene where Gary is arriving at work on his first day. I wanted him to be amazed right from the start. This is what I came up with and believe me, it just gets better from here! I hope that you enjoy!
Gary is not sure that he wants to work with the Society quite yet and so asks to see the "cubical" where he will be stationed. I wanted to show the technology that this company has and that it's beyond what even Gary expected, so there were a few surprises to tempt Gary into working there, Please enjoy this excerpt from "The Compass Society".
The Compass Society (the organization in the book) is a very old and powerful organization. Gary is supposed to report for work today, for his first day. This passage shows a small way the the Society reveals to Gary how much control they will have in his life, but he doesn't realize it yet. Enjoy!
In this scene we begin to see what the Compass Society is really like. A world of mystery and strange events. Gary is intrigued by the wonder, but right now more physical needs require his attention.
Gary has lost everything. He desperately needs a job. As fate (or whatever is controlling his life) would have it, a free sample of the local newspaper appears in his driveway. As he looks through it, he finds what he hopes will be his next job, but when he returns to look at the ad again, it has disappeared. This is a reflection of his life and a preview of things to come. Watch how he reacts to this bit of news.
In this paragraph, I wanted to convey how low Gary's life had become without his wife, Stacy. He had lost everything in the way of possessions and was beginning to lose those internal feelings that would keep him alive. Those dark feelings were beginning to encroach on his regular thinking.
I wanted to start this book out with a tense moment and let you know what the relationship between Gary and Stacy was in case you hadn't read the first book. Stacy went missing and Gary blames himself, as do the police, but he has no idea who took her. He sees a man push her through the door, but can't see what his face looks like. Stacy gives one helpless look at Gary and then she's gone. I wanted to portray the helpless ness that they both experienced during this time.
Only a portion of Tokor's secrets have been discovered on Khizara. Now Linsora must go to the feared planet of Tokorel to discover the rest of Tokor's plan. How will Tokorellans receive this barbaric Khizaran and will she be able to control her emotions enough so as to not give away her alternate reason for being there?
There are times in our lives when only one thing matters, and we become so focused on that one thing, that all else fades away. It becomes the ultimate point to reach in life. Have you ever experience such intensity? Please read this short excerpt from my book, "The Taste of Emotion" and see if you have ever felt this way. If your intrigued by what you read, I hope that you'll consider purchasing a copy. Thank you. Enjoy!
Neither the time nor place. Have you been in a situation where this applied? Something that you felt you needed to do but it wasn't the time nor place? Yet, when that time does come to pass, karma seems to hit it hard. If it's meant to be, then it happens just as you would expect it to. Yet, what if it's not meant to be? What if the outcome is not what you hoped for or expected? Please enjoy this Tokorel book bubble excerpt!
Surprises can me both pleasant and ominous, yet we never know which one the fates have in store for us. Thus the word, "surprise" I guess. I am constantly anticipating my next set of surprises, and look forward to each one both good and bad. They move my life forward and help me to learn and grow. This excerpt show s a surprise. Can you guess which it is, good or bad? Please consider reading the "Tokorel" series. You might just like it!
In the Tokorel series, there is a mixture of military and civilian heroes. Each hero has advantages that the other does not. When they work together, it becomes an amazing force! In this short passage, Kral, a military leader, is working with Tayla, a civilian with some unusual powers. Together they are trying to located a kidnapped woman aboard an unfamiliar ship and together, they are making headway that the two of the, separately, would not be able to do. Teamwork is a theme that runs through these books, both with the good and bad guys. See what you think and please consider reading the Tokorel series.
As I imagine what it would be like to leave home, and by that I mean leaving your home planet, I can only surmise that it might feel as if it were a permanent departure. With the perils of space, one would never know if returning would be a certainty. On the other hand, if space travel were a common and frequent thing, would it be any less certain than what we feel when we drive to work, take a jet to another destination, or go on vacation using a number of other modes of transportation? I wanted Linsora to comment on her departure, while at the same time, show her indifference to the act of leaving as we might when leaving home. See what you think and please consider reading "The Eyes of Tokorel" series.
In life, most people fail to have a life of continuous good luck. Each of us experiences some degree of bad luck or changing fortunes. This particular scene was a bitter-sweet one happening to Linsora. Things were about to change for her. Not a change in the roller coaster ride of ever changing fortunes, but an increase in the intensity of the ride.
We are all familiar with medical facilities. Whether a doctor's office, dentist, specialist of some type or a hospital. You know the smell. You know the feel. We all know it. In my mind, that feeling is universal. That sense of knowing what that smell and feel is, is universal. So when Linsora was led to a place where she was told some healing was taking place, she was prepared for such a building. What would you do if you expected to arrive at a hospital but instead, were ushered into what appeared to be an office building? Would you feel secure? Would you feel apprehensive? I hope that you enjoy this short glimpse into the universe of Tokorel.
Have you ever wanted to speak with someone about something, but you realize that it might be a sensitive subject? Imagine what it would be like to be an ambassador from one planet to another. Now, imagine that you have never learned how to do that job, but you're thrust into it, not by choice. Linsora is in this position, but she's smart enough to realize that certain subjects are sensitive and she is cautious. Take a look and see what you think you would do in this situation.
In a way, we are all ambassadors in our lives and of ourselves. We daily present ourselves to the world and the people in it. We show our best face to some, and our true face to others. Sometimes we're beautiful in our actions while other times the things that we do are ugly and not something to be repeated. Others present themselves to us, and we react according to what we see and what we know. We sometimes wonder how others would react to the same presentation. In this short excerpt, Linsora realizes that she is representing her home world of Khizara, and is angered by one small statement. She wonders how the people on her planet would react, as a populace, to such a statement.
I have to wonder what your perception of evil might be. I think that we all have our fears and we all hope to never encounter those fears of evil during our lifetime. My characters, however, encounter all sorts of evil. Gordek is one of those evils in the form of a Tokorellan. He becomes a living nightmare for Linsora and she, in turn, finds her strength and her will battling with her morality. How to deal with this man? This was a turning point for our hero. How will she survive this? How will it change her? Find out more by reading "The Eyes of Tokorel" series and visit Tokorel.com to learn more about the people in this universe!
How do you know when someone has changed their ways, especially after years of you believing that they haven't? Better yet, how do you know if an entire civilization has changed after 200 years? This is the question that our hero, Linsora, faces as she arrives on Tokorel, a planet that her people has loathed and feared for 200 years. She is the first of her people to visit this "demon" planet, and now she comes as an ambassador. What will she find? Check out the "Eyes of Tokorel" for yourself or go to Tokorel.com to learn more about the people of that universe!
How would you deal with the death of a loved one? A loved one with whom you have grown, who started out as your enemy, but turned into someone whom you couldn't live without. Now, you're being forced to live. Forced to work. Forced to go to places that you didn't want to be. How would you deal with such a situation? Linsora is a strong woman, but even she has a breaking point. Is this it? Please enjoy this short excerpt and read more in the Eyes of Tokorel series.
If you think about how language evolves, you will see how it changes over a period of time. We might not notice it as much in our lifetime, but look into the past and see what popular phrases have evolved into in the past 200 years. The America first declared independence, I'm willing to bet that the people still spoke with a British accent and used popular terms of the day. But look at us now! So it is in book 2 of the Tokorel series. As the Ambassador from the home planet of Khizara, Linsora is faced with speaking with the leaders of the break off colony from 200 years earlier. Learn more about the Tokorel universe by reading the Tokorel series or by visiting Tokorel.com.
In any situation we want control. Mostly, we want control when something bad is happening in that we never want it to get "out of control" before we have an opportunity to reign it in. Often, we have a chance to plot and plan before a situation occurs. We know exactly what we'll do should things proceed as our mind says that it will. What sets leaders apart, however, is the ability to control the situation and think as events unfold. What if the leader is not so virtuous though? Take a look at this short excerpt and see where you think it might go, and be sure to visit Tokorel.com for more backstories and information about the characters!
Evil has a way of trying to twist words and intentions to sound good and convincing. Have you ever noticed that? Evil, in its way of trying to deceive good, will do what it can to convince good that intentions are pure and should be gone along with. So, in my stories, it's sometimes hard to tell, at first, who is good and who is not. Clues are present if you look hard, but sometimes they are disguised as something else. See what you think of this passage and see if this, Gordek person, is a good guy or a bad one.
I give you the title of honest politics. Almost a contradiction in terms. But, we can all hope and dream of the day, can't we? In book 2, Linsora become the Ambassador to Tokorel from Khizara. It becomes the first official contact between the planets in 200 years. By now, if you've learned nothing about Linsora, you at least know of her honesty, and straightforward demeanor. Does this make for grand diplomacy? Probably not. But some people find it refreshing. See what you think. And please learn more at Tokorel.com, where the universe of Tokorel is becoming more and more complete with your help and input. Enjoy.
There are times in our lives when we feel as if all choices have been taken from us. Those times when, no matter what we do our anticipated result is not achieved and we feel helpless. In this excerpt, Linsora is surrounded by three of the most vile people that I could conjure and they are trying to break her using their mental abilities. In a last ditch effort, she tries to take her own life, thinking that this might be the final choice she has available to her, but then even that choice is taken from her. See what you think and learn more by visiting tokorel.com. Be sure to sign up for our monthly newsletter to receive information on free books and prizes.
Protection. It's something that we all have an instinct for. We want to protect those that we love. We want to protect ourselves. We will sometimes do anything to accomplish those two things. How do we know how far we will go until that time comes? We don't. We imagine what we will do, and certainly, that helps when a situation arises, but we never truly know until that time. What if we have that amazing instinct, and are willing to do what we need, but have something, or someone, step in to effectively do what we wanted without knowing who that someone is? Almost like a superhero. Something quite similar happened in this segment. Learn more at tokorel.com.
Each and every day we are under scrutiny. Shakespeare said that "All the world's a stage, And all the men and women merely players; They have their exits and their entrances" and we have an audience of people in the world, who constantly watch us. My characters are no different. You are their audience and you, and the other characters, judge their actions. It's a whole other universe that I have created. Read and enjoy. Go to tokorel.com and learn more.
We all have talents. Some, we choose to share with others. A few of our talents, however, we choose to share only with close friends or family and not with those around us who we know as casual acquaintances. We each have our own reasons for what we do. Sometimes those reasons are legitimate while other times they are only to hide our embarrassment or to protect our pride. Either way, they remain our secret talents. Here is a talent that I'm quite certain I would not want, and yet, my character has it. She chooses, however, to share it only with close friends. After all, why share something that others would not understand?
Literally. The evil and the bad guys in these books know no boundaries. Not only are there the capabilities to inflict physical pain and torture, but there is also the ability to enter into the mind of the person held captive, and torture from within, extracting every feared emotion and causing one to feel the deepest fears that their minds can conjure. Combine both the physical and the mental, and the forthcoming of information is swift, or a coma-like state may follow as the person withdraws into their own mind. As the interrogation begins, you'll feel the fear of being put into this situation. Read this and the trilogy by ordering your copy today at tokorel.com.
In life there are diplomats and those with less tact than a dog in heat. Diplomacy can be something that is learned as an actor in this world. When I speak of diplomacy in my books, I want people to guess if the character is really being diplomatic or not. Here is a sample.
When two people who are in love have to leave each other, it's difficult. It's especially hard when the two people have committed their lives to each other, and they've lost each other once before. Now, throw into the mix the fact that the one leaving has to sit in a cramped vehicle with someone that she despises and it makes it even more difficult. There is more to the story, but you'll have to read the book to find out what happens. Enjoy!
There are always a few things from our pasts that hit us hard, and many times we are struck with those memories when a sight, sound or smell hits us. Keeping that thought is mind, I like for my characters to to be struck with the same thing. Linsora thinks that she's going to a hospital and prepares for the sights and smells involved with such an institution, but what she sees tells her something different.
When I introduce a character for the first time, I like to compare him or her to the natural surroundings in their lives. Yorel is not only the leader of a planet, but he is also prosperous looking and surrounds himself with wealth and affluence.
Linsora is not stupid by any means. She shows her great intelligence many times throughout the series, and in this case, she is showing her shrewd side by not playing her cards all at the same time. She needs the leverage of the historical books to get what she wants, and what she wants is something that she can only obtain through the power of the leaders on this foreign world. In book 4, she reaches out to use this power one last time, but for now, in book 2, she's testing the waters.
It's my thought that no matter where you go in this big, vast universe, you're going to find ambition, greed and corruption as well as honesty, compassion and selflessness. People with emotions are people and they want to get places in life. On Tokorel, Linsora meets the extremes of good and evil. Here is a sample of her first meeting with the political powers on Tokorel.
I've always wondered this. When does more become too much? It's an interesting concept. Does more make our lives better or worse? Does less make our lives more meaningful? When I write, I believe that many of my life's questions come out of my subconscious through the words of my characters, and sometimes the answers appear on these pages as well. A little interesting insight into not just the characters, but me as well.
There are times when people feel premonitions. Times when we should listen to our gut instincts. I've always believed this and when I taught martial arts, I believed in sharing this with all of my students. Linsora is a strong person and I firmly believe that the strongest people follow their gut. Linsora can tell that things are not right, but she doesn't know what or what she can do about it. Please enjoy this excerpt from book 2.
The bad guys in the Tokorel series are power hungry, uncaring and unfeeling nasties that care only for themselves. I liked showing some vulnerabilities but, when small victories arose, I wanted to show how pumped up these bad guys become. Human nature. In this scene, the bad guy just experienced a major coup, and now will take this weakened woman as his prize, for his pleasure. See if you feel your hatred increase for this man with each word that you read.
In this section I wanted to show the different opinions that are shared between Khizara and Tokorel. Linsora is speaking with the second in command of the planet of Tokorel and they are sharing, candidly, their thoughts about their worlds. Take a look and please enjoy!
Politics don't change from planet to planet. This is what I wanted to show in this passage. Not only the fact that politics don't change, but the fact that people get tired of the power struggle. Linsora, especially was tired of hearing the two people in front of her, bicker, while she was waiting for news. Read on and let me know what you think. Enjoy!
In this segment, I wanted to show that even Linsora can become, strong as she is, flustered under the correct circumstances. Although she's on a planet that is not her home, she is still trying to maintain diplomacy and maintain her sense of justice. She trusts a man who has just been publicly declared a traitor to his world, and she announces this openly. How would she visualize these people? Read and please, enjoy!
We all want it and oft times find it lacking, however, there are numerous times when it's lacking because we want it to be. Sometimes, the lack of dignity can be used to embarrass others. I wanted this to be the case here, when our heroes were about to be taken into custody and were out for one last fling! See how I did in this short excerpt. Enjoy!
Linsora has an interesting talent. Truth be told, she has many interesting talents, but this one in particular crops up in the books throughout the storyline. Here was a different take on the voices that Linsora hears when she visits old places. This was Tokor's "first" hoe which had been turned into a museum of sorts, and place where people could tour and see how their leader lived. But the voices of the past are muted by the people of the present. Please enjoy this excerpt.
Very brief excerpt from book 2. The second in command of the planet is a very sensible man and speaks plainly about his relationship with the Director of the planet. Enjoy!
Linsora is skilled with her knives from a lifetime of using them, but her enemies are just as skilled with their abilities to manipulate the emotions of others with only a thought. Sometimes, two or more will gang-up on one person. I wanted to show how quickly this type of assault can disable a person. Please enjoy this excerpt from book 2 in the Tokorel series!
Here we wanted to show that even the heroes are human and, when it seems like their final farewell, might truly do what humans do. Take a look and you'll see what I mean.
In this section I wanted to show that our hero, Linsora, is not always working or in jeopardy or being attacked, but she also has a cultural side. It's important to balance your characters lives just as we would balance our own. Enjoy and be sure to check out Tokorel on Amazon or CreateSpace!
On Linsora's home world of Khizara, knife fights are commonplace. On Tokorel, that type of physical violence is unfathomable. In this short excerpt, I wanted to show that concept between Linsora and the second in command of Tokorel.
In book 2, Linsora gets to travel to Tokorel as the Ambassador from Khizara. As she sits, speaking with the 2nd in charge of the planet, they touch on sensitive subjects. Linsora is not one to pull punches. In fact she will generally speak her mind to anyone at anytime. But this time, she feels the need to walk cautiously.
LInsora, although fierce and very good with knives, also has a pleasant side. It's easy for people to forget that, and in this short passage of the book, we see during a conversation with a new friend, that sometimes Linsora's impressions are not always the ones that she chooses to give but instead, those picked up intuitively by others.
The age old battle is not lost in our stories. The bad guys always seem to have an ultimate goal in mind but are checked even by their own. This one conversation speaks volumes of the two characters. Linsora believes that good will win, while Gordek is certain that evil will triumph, as long as it's his evil that is in the lead!
When Linsora starts out in a bad mood, there are some things that you just don't do. Boring her is one of them...
How a dignitary who is an enemy of the state, gets around with the blessings of the head of the planet.
Linsora is greeted by regal politicians on her first trip to Tokorel.
Some people want money. Others want fame. Some just want power and all of the perks and curses that come with it. Linsora's brother, Yokosh, wants it all.
Secrets don't always remain so. Sometimes, they are meant to be revealed when fate needs a good laugh, and other times when a good lesson needs to be learned. In book 2 of the Tokorel series, fate is often fickle and teasingly so.
After going through so much, what would you expect or at the very least, hope for, when being called to an unknown place? Would you hope for a reward? Would you expect at least words of praise? Linsora hopes for more...
Linsora is strong for her stature, but when other around you have the ability to control your emotions, it becomes difficult to use that strength. And when you want to use it to escape your captors by ending it all, and you can't, you come to the horrible realization that the toments will continue.
Linsora learns a valuable lesson about life. Even though you have enemies, it doesn't always mean that they are so very different from yourself or your people.
Gordek is an enemy to Linsora, but it's imperative to him that she makes a speech to the public of a planet that she has never set foot on. In fact, no one from her home world has ever been there, but in order to find what she's looking for, being accepted is necessary. What would you do if an enemy helped you to further their own needs while helping you find yours?
As with life, there are triumphant achievements and defeats that leave a sour taste in one's mouth. After a confrontation, it's always fun to see the "good guys" come out on top, but that isn't always the case. So what happens after the victory? Here's a quick look!
I thought about travelers in space. They're cooped up in a very enclosed environment for a very long time. Even though the air is recirculated and refreshed, it must become stale and something that a person gets used to over time. So, when a space traveler leaves the ship, what does the planet smell like? Does each planet have a signature smell? Take a look at what Linsora thought as she stepped foot, for the first time. into the Tokorellan air! Enjoy.
We tend to think, in general, of a prison being a confined place with guards and bars and locks and so much more to keep us from escaping to freedom. Often however, a prison can be anyplace where we feel trapped and uncomfortable. After Linsora was forcibly brought aboard Gordek's ship, even though she had her own quarters and was fed well, she was still at the mercy of this man who was not her friend. A prison. A now she is being forced to bend to his will in obtaining access to a planet from which he had been banned. Please enjoy!
This is a scene from book 2 in the series, just prior to a mental battle. Linsora is helpless and at the mercy of three of the most heartless and cruel captors she could imagine. Together, they are about to attempt to destroy her champion should he attempt to save her. Still, she will fight them, with her words if nothing else, until the end.
Here, I wanted to show that Permac and Linsora have an amazing relationship and compliment each other while, at the same time, grow with each other. When they are running to escape a battalion of guards, it turns into a game and comes to an interesting end. Just a small sample of what you'll find in this book of adventure!
Linsora had been battered and beaten by her half brother and his girlfriend. I wanted to show that Linsora is tough and is willing to get even, but is creative in the way that she gets that revenge. Kral, her friend and former lover, has been on her side the entire time, but has also had moments where he had been controlled by the bad guys as well, so he's more than willing to help get them out of the picture. Please enjoy this short excerpt.
Andrew Barton is an ordinary man who, each weekend, stumbles into extraordinary circumstances. With a college degree in Agricultural Sciences but a job driving a forklift in a warehouse, Andrew, like many of us, finds that his release from the humdrum workweek comes through the tinkering in his garage on the weekends. Although his goals are directed toward other ends, he mistakenly travels through time, into other dimensions and even ends up taking his family and friends on a ride to a location that is the last place anyone ever wants to end up! Lines of Force will take you on adventures that you’ll never forget and want to enjoy time and time again. Let Andrew Barton take you along to unexplored territory in this book about mistakes becoming incredible exploits!
Time and inter dimensional travel, at least in my mind, can be a very tricky and confusing venture. In this excerpt from my book, "Lines of Force", Matt is ready to wrestle his friend, Andrew, to the ground. Confusing the situation, another "Andrew" appears from behind. Which is the real Andrew? Where did this second one come from? How is Matt to choose which Andrew to take on first? I hope that you enjoy this fun, but a little confusing, excerpt from my book and if you enjoy it, please consider purchasing a copy. Thanks!
I love toying with what could/might happen when time travel becomes a reality. How would we react if we met our future self? What if our future self tried to give us advice? Would we remember the entire conversation in the future when we reached that point in time? Would we change what we said or would we be able to change what we said? Time travel theory is so complex and uncertain. I guess that we won't ever know until it happens! In the meantime, please enjoy this short excerpt from my book, "Lines of Force" and toy with the questions yourself!
The old saying states that if you fail to plan, you're planning to fail. The Andrew's time machine is confiscated by the government of the future in my book, "Lines of Force", a future rebel comes to his aid in an attempt to help him recover this device. As he convinces Andrew that he is truly there to help, Andrew observes that just storming the gates would not be prudent, so what's the plan? How would you solve such an issue? Please read this short excerpt and wee what you think. If it intrigues you, please consider purchasing a copy of "Lines of Force". I would appreciate it!
In my mind, the future evolves much faster than it did from the time I was a child until now. So when I write about things in the future I tend to come up with much different ideas. In this excerpt, a wall becomes a door. There are many other strange and wonderful things that I think up in my stories. I'd love for you to experience them all, but for now see what you think of this excerpt from "Lines of Force" and if you enjoy it, I hope that you'll consider purchasing a copy. Thanks!
Who knows how buildings will change in the future? Will walls be translucent or even afford us more privacy by being one way transparency? Will the outside of buildings appear to be solid but inside reveal an open view of the outdoors? Technology continues to evolve. In this short excerpt from my book, "Lines of Force" Andrew approaches a building that seemingly has no entrance or windows, and yet one mysteriously appears when he approaches. I hope that you enjoy this short peek into this book.
I'm hard of hearing, and so when people talk I don't always hear what they are saying. It's frustrating for both me and them. It's really frustrating, though, when someone with perfectly good hearing doesn't listen to what is being said, and later on has to ask about it. In this short excerpt, Andrew is explaining to Matt about the current situation even though he knew that Matt was there before. But when Matt looks at him with the completely confused demeanor that is Matt, he knows that the conversation is going nowhere. Please enjoy this short segment from my book, "Lines of Force" and if you like it I hope that you'll consider purchasing a copy. Thanks!
What would you do if you suddenly and unexpectedly became famous? People hovering over you. Lights and cameras in your face. Dignitaries coming to see you. Suddenly, everyone knew your name. How would you react? We all dream of fame and fortune, but it might not be all we think or imagine. Please take a moment to enjoy this short excerpt from my book, "Lines of Force" and if you enjoy it, please consider purchasing a copy. Thank you!
We all fear it. Someone in authority is about to talk to us about something that they feel we did wrong. Our minds race as do our hearts. It's time to defend ourselves against accusations and allocations. Please enjoy this short excerpt from my book, "Lines of Force" and see what you think. If you are intrigued, please consider purchasing a copy. I'd really appreciate it! Thanks.
We all have wishes. some more serious than others, It's difficult to know that something is just a wish away, and yet one must work to fulfill the desire behind the wish. That's one of the things that I love about writing. I can make wishes and dreams come true even if only in a story. Take a look at this excerpt and see if you would wish for this. And if you do, I wish for you to purchase a copy of "Lines of Force" for you or a friend. I'm certain that you'll enjoy it! Thank you.
Have you ever just wanted to get away. Have you wanted to escape? Not just on a vacation, but get away from this time and escape into somewhere else. Do you feel that sometimes you would fit in better somewhere else? Please read this short excerpt from my book, "Lines of Force" and see what you think. If you enjoy reading these, please consider purchasing a copy and share it with your friends. I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!
Most of us have played hide and seek. A few of us have been in trouble attempting to hide from a person chasing us. If you have been in either of these positions, you may know the fear of being caught, and the even bigger fear of being turned in. See if you can relate to this short excerpt from my book, "Lines of Force", and if you enjoy it, please consider purchasing a copy on Amazon! Thank you.
I've mentioned before that I've always toyed with the idea that time travel could be possible, and if we were to unlock that secret there's no telling how our lives would change. In this excerpt, Andrew realizes that he's suddenly gone back in time, but isn't sure what to think about it. Things have changed and now he needs to discover what has changed. The changes are subtle, but they exist. Has he changed all of history beginning with his family? Take a look at this excerpt and please consider reading "Lines of Force" when you have a moment. You might enjoy it!
I've been around a long time. At least it seems that way to me! I've learned a lot and learn a little more each day. It seems to me that one of the things I've learned revolves around reality. We all have our own reality that we tend to mix with the actual reality around us. The realities that we create in our own minds are powerful and often inaccurate. They can cause us to believe things that either don't really exist or, at the very least, don't exist in the real world. My character, Andrew Barton, realizes this and does a very good job of explaining it in this short chapter introduction. I hope that you enjoy it and that your days will be filled with the realities that make you the happiest!
I've always loved to speculate how this world would have turned out if only one or two things had been different, and I tend to write things that reflect that. In "Lines of Force" Andrew invents things that he doesn't know how to control and consequently, he ends up in some very strange situations including inter-dimensional travel. In this particular chapter, he's jumped to a world where things have changed and morals are completely upside down from the way he was raised. The person who is his best friend in his home dimension is explaining the differences. They horrify Andrew but are perfectly normal to Matt. How would you fare stepping into a totally different world?
I've always wondered what the future might hold for us all. Not tomorrow or the next day, but the far away future. I can imagine and that imagining takes my characters into futures that are fun and fied with my thoughts on how it might be. It's very cool to be able ot read how they react with the future and how the future reacts with them. In a way it's almost like I really get to go there, and it makes me smile whenever i go back and read what I've written. When I was a teenager, I would dream about how the future would be. I'd draw pictures of what I thought buildings would look like. My big future was the twenty-first century. Even though it didn't turn out quite the way I imagined, it's still pretty cool! I hope that you enjoy my excerpt!
I've always been fascinated with the thought and theory of time travel. Since it hasn't been done, there are so many things on which we can speculate. I've always wondered if we would be able to visit ourselves in the past or future, deliver messages, reminisce or many other things. What a rush that would be.At any rate, since it hasn't been done I can theorize to my heart's content and come up with all sorts of scenarios that, at the very least, sound good. Take a look at this excerpt from "Lines of Force" and see if you agree with what i came up with!
Being human is something that we all take for granted. When we see someone who we feel is not as emotional or sensitive as we believe they should be we sometimes consider them to be not quite human. I have met so many people like this and when I finally see a spark of humanity ooze from them I sigh with relief. Humanity found! One leader has discovered that his team has a spark of humanity in them and you'll see what his reaction is in this short excerpt from "Lines of Force".
We all have accomplishments. We all have friends. We like to share our accomplishments with our friends. All of us at one time or another, have misspoken when speaking. When I write, I try to make my characters as real as possible, so it should come as no surprise that my character frequently makes mistakes. Poor Andrew. He gets put on the spot for not quite saying the right thing. See what I mean in this new book bubble from my book, "Lines of Force".
"Lines of Force" was a book that allowed me to go crazy with theories about time and time travel. I was able to express whatever feelings I had about it and since it's never been done, well, they sounded plausible. This was a theory that my character, Andrew Barton, was trying to explain to a neighbor. I think that he did a pretty good job and I was happy with the explanation when he was done. See what you think and I hope that you'll consider reading, "Lines of Force" when you have a few moments!
I've always wanted to travel in time. I've always thought that it would be incredibly cool to be able to to do so. I've always wondered what the results would be. Would it be like watching a movie where you wouldn't be able to interact with the things that have already occured, or would you once again be a part of the action? How much would change and how much could you change, if anything? It's a concept that many people debate over and one that we may never, at least in my lifetime, find the answers to. In my stories, however, I'm able to fantasize about what might happen and Andrew has just taken that first step into the realm of time travel. He's just not certain how he did it. He's about to find out what repercussions there can be. See what YOU think and enjoy this short excerpt from "Lines of Force" available through Amazon! Buy your copy today.
When I become involved in something like a project or work, and I really like what I'm doing, I can work into the wee hours of the night and never notice the time slipping away. I've done it often when I write songs, or when I write books, or if I'm working on marketing of some kind. I'm certain that each of us have had those major moments when time rushes by and leaves the rest of the world in the dust. My character, Andrew, absolutely loves to tinker in his garage. He never really knows what the results will be, but always hopes that they'll be spectacular. Even when friends stop by and try to convince him to go out. See what I mean and please enjoy this excerpt!
My father used to work as an Electrical Engineer. As I was growing up I got to see some pretty amazing things. When I was in fourth grade, my dad brought home a Tesla Coil so that I could show my class. Another time, he let me show a box that had a three dimensional hologram to a class. Many times during my life I saw scientific things that bordered on seeming magical, so it made sense that some of my characters could view a scientific breakthrough as unbelievable and magical. That's where this segment came from. Please enjoy and consider reading "Lines of Force" when you want an original story to entertain your imagination!
My characters all have certain personalities. Andrew Barton is a lovable dork, and so when he speaks, he often does so without really thinking first and it often gets him in trouble. Do you know anyone like that? In this short segment, Andrew is having a heartfelt conversation with his wife, Julie, but his words are not quite what he wants them to be. Take a look and enjoy this short bookbubble!
One sock in the dryer. Keys being moved. Papers suddenly vanishing from where you always keep them. Have you ever wondered how it all happens? In this short segment, I wanted Andrew to know that he wasn't going crazy but that, in fact, his numerous accidental discoveries have caused certain anomalies to appear in this dimension. It's actually just him playing tricks on himself from another time. Please enjoy this excerpt from "Lines of Force" and check it out on Amazon if you're interested in learning more!
In "Lines of Force" I created Andrew Barton to be a bumbling and yet likable fellow. He stumbles on one discovery after another and even though he's not quite sure how they work, he continues to explore their possibilities. At this point in the book, he has tried to go back into the past, but instead he ends up traveling to the future. The people there are expecting him and many of them look at Andrew as a celebrity. So when the police are called to find him, they are intrigued about this man from the past and they wonder if they'll be able to have something to show that they did, indeed, meet the man from history.
I love to write about time travel, travel between dimensions and travel techniques that seem impossible but may someday be common place. But the time travel is fun to write about and speculation about what might happen. I know that we could discuss time travel and how something might work and others might not. The thing is though, that I write fiction, and I can choose how the situations will turn out. I try to think about how they might really turn out, but that makes my head hurt. Anyway, here's an interesting scenario that will show you how I think about these things. Let me know what you think. Email me at: firstname.lastname@example.org
Many times in our lives, our senses are deceived. In fact, they are tricked almost daily, and we don't really consider that to be the case. When we watch movies, we are drawn in to the story and the setting and can almost feel ourselves there and a part of the action. On hot days, we can see things that aren't there. Mirages. But what would you do if the thing right in front of you turned out to be only an illusion? What if most of your life was an illusion? What if everything else was real, but it was you, in actuality, that was the illusion?
When I write about time travel, I like for my characters to think about certain phrases that they use and how literal they are and aren't. I love for them to catch what they're saying and either correct it or see the irony in what had just been said. I love it when they announce what they're thinking to the rest of the world around them. Here's an example of what I'm talking about. Enjoy!
It's said that we can learn from our mistakes, but all too often we are more frustrated at the mistake than we are interested in learning. My characters are no different and when Andrew tries new things that don't quite work the way he wants them too, he becomes as frustrated as anyone would. You'll see when you read this excerpt. But life goes on and Andrew eventually discovers new things. Not always what he's looking for, but strange and amazing things none-the-less. Please enjoy this excerpt from one of the weekend adventures of Andrew Barton!
Most of us want to do the right thing. We're raised by parents who want us to become a better, smarter and more successful version of them. So we try our hardest and do our best and do what we can to please those who raised us. So what would happen if you woke up one morning, only to find that the world you grew up in, had changed? That all of the values you had learned were suddenly different? How would you fare in such a world? In this book, Andrew suddenly finds himself in a strange and different world where his values have suddenly become something that is totally unacceptable. Take a look and let me know what you think.
As I always try to make my characters more lifelike, I tend to draw from real life experiences even when the story is a fantasy or sci-fi novel. In this scene, Matt is visiting his friend, as promised. The night before, however, Matt was out celebrating with his buddies. He's not at his best at the moment and things become, shall we say, interesting.
Andrew knows that he only discovers things by accident. In fact, he wishes that he had more formal training so that when he did make a discovery, he knew why and exactly what it meant. To Andrew, his tinkering is not only fun but he feels somehow that it's important and will someday make a difference. So he likes to spend as much time as possible on the weekends working in his garage. He also wants to make sure that he balances his this with his family life. His wife, Julie, understands this. That's what this segment is all about. I hope that you enjoy!
Matt and Andrew have a unique best friend relationship. In this passage, I wanted to show just how close they were and how well they are able tyo get along. This is early in the book and part of the character development stage. Please enjoy!
As Andrew's knowledge of what he's doing increases, I wanted him to go to someplace unique. He's gone to this place with his family and friends and after they arrive and are invited to the castle, where the king greets them and shows that he has certain powers. The King, seems to know much about Andrew and his family and friends, which shows us more about the team. Take a look at what I did here to present you, the reader, with more insight into my characters. Enjoy!
Time travel is an interesting thing, and when I write about it, I have the opportunity to think about what the reactions would be to the simple action of traveling through time. It's an interesting thought, and in this scene, I present one possibility of what could happen if a person goes back in time and displaces himself from the timeline. Yeah, this is how I think sometimes. :-) Go ahead and read and enjoy!
I wanted to throw someone into the story who was less than ethical but very enthused about his job. We never find out who he works for, but even his partner doesn't care much for the way he behaves. In these few sentences I wanted to show how crazy this man was. See what you think as you read this excerpt from "Lines of Force." Enjoy!
Andrew had wanted to do so much with the accidental discoveries that he had made. He didn't know how to use what he had discovered, and now he was hoping to do one thing but ended up doing something quite different. He arrived with his friends and wife just before dawn, but dawn where? The description gives you clues, but will you understand right away? Take a read and see. Most of all, enjoy!
Andrew has gone into the future. I intentionally made this a future that he inadvertently created, and that he now feels the need to try and correct. As this was his first visit, this is where the mistake was made and so his future self also appears, which wold be a paradox in and of itself. But you know what? It's fiction and fun to read. So, take a look at this excerpt. Speculate and discuss amongst yourselves and enjoy!
In writing this book, I realized that messing with time and inter-dimensional travel could create some really odd effects. I really had fun with this and created this scene, where another Andrew appears in the garage and tries to destroy the POD. When the real Andrew appears, the fake Andrew vanishes mysteriously and Matt goes into his defensive mode by trying to be funny. Take a look and see how much fun this was to work with. Enjoy!
Time travel is a tricky thing. Setting straight something that you've messed up in the future is even trickier. I wanted to show that poor Andrew is getting smarter through his life, and was able to figure out how much he had messed things up in the future and hi plans to fix them, at least as much as he thought they should be fixed. Please enjoy this short excerpt!
Poor Andrew doesn't know what he's doing and bumbles into one amazing discovery after another, but he wants to think that he knows what's going on. In this passage I wanted Andrew to show that he tries, oh so hard, to sound smart, but he admits that things he discovers are by accident. Little does he know that the next few moments are going to change his life drastically! Enjoy and please follow me on Bublish!
In this small section, Andrew is attempting to escape back into the past to his own time, but the Governor is determined not to let that happen. I wanted to show her frustration and how helpless she's feeling about history changing before her very eyes. Please enjoy this excerpt.
In this paragraph is the beginning of the mass confusion that enters Andrew's life. Even though he has no idea how it happened, he has not only thrown himself back in time, but actually crossed over to a different timeline. He no longer has just one child, but now has two. He has to go through old photos and writings just to discover who he is and now it's time to try and get back to where he belongs. What has he done?
I wanted to show just how different Andrew and Matt are and was able to do so in this short segment. Andrew, the prim and proper and Matt, the carefree soul. They meet the Governor in a distant time. Andrew is polite. Matt, well, take a look for yourself. The two balance each other well I think!
In "Lines of Force" I have the main character, Andrew Barton, give a brief introduction to the coming story. He wants the reader to think about what he or she would do if faced with the upcoming situation. They were questions that I asked myself when writing the book and before each chapter. So basically, when you read each chapter, I'm asking you to think about the world in various situations and think to yourself, "what would I do and how would I react?"
In the future, Matt has discovered that he can tell the glass what he wants, pour in water, and get...
Andrew realizes that with time travel. he can be multiple places at the same time by going to the same time, but appearing in multiple locations!
Andrew is trying to explain to the police, in the future, why he was there, but really wasn't there in a place that didn't exist until he arrived...
Andrew has just perfected a device that allows him to float in the air, using magnetic forces against each other. His friend, Susie wants to try it, but Andrew is reluctant. He finally gives in and Susie shows him how floating in the air is really done!
Andrew and Matt have gone into the future and are being held captive in a hotel room. Matt watches the equivalent of today's television and what he finds out amazes even him
When I was writing about Matt and Andrew stumbling into the future, I thought about how things might change. Security for one thing, would be different, and in this scene, Matt is shown how keys have been replaced my a ring on the finger transmitting a frequency in combination with the speed of the swipe to begin a sequence to open and close hidden doors.
Andrew and Matt have landed in a future time, where the people there were expecting them. Andrew and Matt didn't expect, however, that there would be people who would want to go back to what they felt was a simpler time...the 21st Century.
Andrew Barton is always making mistakes, and when he makes mistakes, he makes them in big ways! In this scene, Andrew has tried an experiment where he hoped to go into the past, but his friend, Matt, who came along with him, has discovered some interesting things about the place where they now reside!
When I was writing this book about the crazy discoveries that Andrew Barton would stumble across, I thought that it would be interesting to have him introduce each chapter. In this chapter intro, Andrew looks back on the story which you are about to read, and gives you the slightest of a hint as to what is coming. Read more in "Lines of Force".
Working with electricity, plasma and magnetism, Andrew thinks that he's found a way to overcome gravity. He asks his friend, Matt, if he would like to try. Here is an excerpt of Matt's answer.
Andrew Barton is about to enter a world where all of his current values are thrown out the window...
This was one of the first experiences that Andrew had with mistakenly traveling in time. It's not originally what he was looking to do, but it happened. I wanted to show that things have changed because of his accident, and what better way to show it than by revealing his wife's surprise? Enjoy!
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